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<blockquote data-quote="Satin Knights" data-source="post: 6032073" data-attributes="member: 6666968">Reviewing Dyre Blackreef:a) I reformatted a lot.&nbsp; Some browsers have different fonts which lead to slightly longer text lines than others.&nbsp; So, I trimmed back a lot of text to give a 2-3 character buffer before the borders.b) All characters get a &quot;regional language&quot; if they are human and not from Venza (common).&nbsp; Ship Rat, aka Pirate, seemed most appropriate to fit in there, even though it is not an official one.c) I too will approve calling a scimitar carried by a pirate a cutlass. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f609.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=";)" title="Wink&nbsp; &nbsp; ;)"&nbsp; data-smilie="2"data-shortname=";)" />d) Since I had to look up &quot;Lamellar Curiass&quot;, I labelled it as armor.e) You didn't have the long coat specified in your inventory.&nbsp; Fixed.f) I inserted a __NOTOC__ at the top, to remove the table of contents and adjusted the picture size a bit.&nbsp; I also removed the &quot;posted by...&quot; in it by changing from thumb to right|SIZEpx.Dyre Blackreef has his first APPROVAL of two.&nbsp; Any player can do the second review at first level.&nbsp; You have enough now that Dyre can enter the <a href="http://www.enworld.org/forum/living-pathfinder/279251-tavern-thread-dunn-wright-inn-new-post.html" target="_blank">Dunn Wright Inn</a> and start socializing.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Satin Knights, post: 6032073, member: 6666968"] Reviewing Dyre Blackreef: a) I reformatted a lot. Some browsers have different fonts which lead to slightly longer text lines than others. So, I trimmed back a lot of text to give a 2-3 character buffer before the borders. b) All characters get a "regional language" if they are human and not from Venza (common). Ship Rat, aka Pirate, seemed most appropriate to fit in there, even though it is not an official one. c) I too will approve calling a scimitar carried by a pirate a cutlass. ;) d) Since I had to look up "Lamellar Curiass", I labelled it as armor. e) You didn't have the long coat specified in your inventory. Fixed. f) I inserted a __NOTOC__ at the top, to remove the table of contents and adjusted the picture size a bit. I also removed the "posted by..." in it by changing from thumb to right|SIZEpx. Dyre Blackreef has his first [COLOR=Lime][B]APPROVAL[/B][/COLOR] of two. Any player can do the second review at first level. You have enough now that Dyre can enter the [URL="http://www.enworld.org/forum/living-pathfinder/279251-tavern-thread-dunn-wright-inn-new-post.html"]Dunn Wright Inn[/URL] and start socializing. [/QUOTE]

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