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<blockquote data-quote="jkason" data-source="post: 6144019" data-attributes="member: 2710"><p>Reviewing <a href="http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/Belendwar_Thysenkrupp_(true-darkmoon)" target="_blank">Belendwar</a>:</p><p></p><p>1) You're due a regional language, from the list on <a href="http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/Language" target="_blank">This page</a>, which would also determine the general area your gnome is from.</p><p></p><p>2) Hit Point total was correct, but the math indicated he had a d10 when it should be d6. Fixed.</p><p></p><p>3) You've spent two more Skill points than I believe you have. By my math, you get 2 (Wizard) + 3 (INT) + 1 (FC). That last I'm kind of assuming, since you didn't add the bonus to HP, and I filled out the math section on top of the skills with that in mind. Anyway, I count 8 points spent when you only had 6 to begin with.</p><p></p><p>I believe what's happened is that you're mis-applying your Traits. Capable gives you a +1 bonus to the skill, not a rank in it. You still have to spend a skill point to get a rank, and you still have to possess a rank to get the Class Skill bonus on it. If I'm right, then, your Bluff and Intimidate totals should actually be 4 (+3 CHA, +1 Trait). </p><p></p><p>Whether that's what happened or not, you'll need to remove two ranks or help me figure out where the other two are coming from.</p><p></p><p>4) I total your spending at 113.3, not 115.3. Fixed.</p><p></p><p></p><p>The skills are a dealbreaker, so until you have those sorted, <strong><span style="color: yellow">NOT YET</span></strong> on approval.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="jkason, post: 6144019, member: 2710"] Reviewing [url=http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/Belendwar_Thysenkrupp_(true-darkmoon)]Belendwar[/url]: 1) You're due a regional language, from the list on [url=http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/Language]This page[/url], which would also determine the general area your gnome is from. 2) Hit Point total was correct, but the math indicated he had a d10 when it should be d6. Fixed. 3) You've spent two more Skill points than I believe you have. By my math, you get 2 (Wizard) + 3 (INT) + 1 (FC). That last I'm kind of assuming, since you didn't add the bonus to HP, and I filled out the math section on top of the skills with that in mind. Anyway, I count 8 points spent when you only had 6 to begin with. I believe what's happened is that you're mis-applying your Traits. Capable gives you a +1 bonus to the skill, not a rank in it. You still have to spend a skill point to get a rank, and you still have to possess a rank to get the Class Skill bonus on it. If I'm right, then, your Bluff and Intimidate totals should actually be 4 (+3 CHA, +1 Trait). Whether that's what happened or not, you'll need to remove two ranks or help me figure out where the other two are coming from. 4) I total your spending at 113.3, not 115.3. Fixed. The skills are a dealbreaker, so until you have those sorted, [b][color=yellow]NOT YET[/COLOR][/B] on approval. [/QUOTE]
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