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<blockquote data-quote="Aura" data-source="post: 6215860" data-attributes="member: 6747658">Reviewing The NavigatorThis is a non-judge review of your character. Approval requires either one non-judge and one judge approvals, or two judge approvals. As a non-judge, I only edit your character sheet to fix obvious typos (of which you had none.) Other issues are pointed out for you to fix.Stuff That Needs Fixin':* None - No errors that prevent approval were foundStuff That Could be Changed:* Personally recommend something into STR/CON, perhaps at cost of 2 INT.Notation Issues and Typos:* Recommend explicitly stating &quot;Light Encumberance&quot;* Note: His age doesn't vary according to what people believe.Comments:* Basic character concept seems solid.* Starchild: Seems reasonable for Callisto, but will need a Judge's opinion.* Careful in pushing Bluff, you may run into the GM veto, as per the skill description. You can also be confronted with a long term corrosive effect if you're not careful.* I'm somewhat concerned about being too skill gonzo and too easy to take down in combat, thus the STR/CON recommendation above.* It's Dunn *Wright* Inn. This is Venza, not The Wasteland. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)"&nbsp; data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />Since there are no absolute 'must fix' issues: STAMP! One non-judge APPROVAL. This means you can meander into the DWI, introduce yourself, etc, while you wait for an adventure to come your way.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Aura, post: 6215860, member: 6747658"] [U]Reviewing The Navigator[/U] This is a non-judge review of your character. Approval requires either one non-judge and one judge approvals, or two judge approvals. As a non-judge, I only edit your character sheet to fix obvious typos (of which you had none.) Other issues are pointed out for you to fix. Stuff That Needs Fixin': * None - No errors that prevent approval were found Stuff That Could be Changed: * Personally recommend something into STR/CON, perhaps at cost of 2 INT. Notation Issues and Typos: * Recommend explicitly stating "Light Encumberance" * Note: His age doesn't vary according to what people believe. Comments: * Basic character concept seems solid. * Starchild: Seems reasonable for Callisto, but will need a Judge's opinion. * Careful in pushing Bluff, you may run into the GM veto, as per the skill description. You can also be confronted with a long term corrosive effect if you're not careful. * I'm somewhat concerned about being too skill gonzo and too easy to take down in combat, thus the STR/CON recommendation above. * It's Dunn *Wright* Inn. This is Venza, not The Wasteland. :) Since there are no absolute 'must fix' issues: STAMP! One non-judge [COLOR=#00ff00][I]APPROVAL[/I][/COLOR]. This means you can meander into the DWI, introduce yourself, etc, while you wait for an adventure to come your way. [/QUOTE]

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