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<blockquote data-quote="Aura" data-source="post: 6232209" data-attributes="member: 6747658">Reviewing Alec MorganAs a non-judge, I can supply one of your two approvals necessary to enter play. The other will need to come from a judge. However, with one approval, you can enter the DWI, roleplay/introduce yourself, and wait for DM to come along and give you a game invite. Also as a non-judge, I don't tend to edit your character sheet much (save for obvious typos), if at all, but instead make suggestions for you to change. And finally, I make mistakes every now and again, if you see I have made an error in your review feel free to mention it and I'll double-check.Stuff That Needs Fixin':* I don't think you qualify for Power Attack (needs BAB +1 or higher).Typos and Notation Issues:* Your WIS modifier seems off at +2, but everything on the character sheet matches +1. Fixed.* You might want to put 'Alchemist' in where Class 1 is listed in things like saving throws. It will make it easier later on when you get into other classes (which it seems you're aiming to do, but that is merely an assumption on my part.)* The 'Special' for your dagger was listed as 'Special'. I changed it to -, but if you want to list range modifier or something, feel free.* You might want to list the range modifier for your sling.Comments:* This character isn't exactly unoptimized. You should have no problems with holding your own in a fight.* In order to get this out (I'm on lunch) I'll have to regrettably skip your background and assume it's cool.NOT YET... you'll need to look at the Power Attack issue but you're pretty close.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Aura, post: 6232209, member: 6747658"] [U]Reviewing Alec Morgan[/U] As a non-judge, I can supply one of your two approvals necessary to enter play. The other will need to come from a judge. However, with one approval, you can enter the DWI, roleplay/introduce yourself, and wait for DM to come along and give you a game invite. Also as a non-judge, I don't tend to edit your character sheet much (save for obvious typos), if at all, but instead make suggestions for you to change. And finally, I make mistakes every now and again, if you see I have made an error in your review feel free to mention it and I'll double-check. Stuff That Needs Fixin': * I don't think you qualify for Power Attack (needs BAB +1 or higher). Typos and Notation Issues: * Your WIS modifier seems off at +2, but everything on the character sheet matches +1. Fixed. * You might want to put 'Alchemist' in where Class 1 is listed in things like saving throws. It will make it easier later on when you get into other classes (which it seems you're aiming to do, but that is merely an assumption on my part.) * The 'Special' for your dagger was listed as 'Special'. I changed it to -, but if you want to list range modifier or something, feel free. * You might want to list the range modifier for your sling. Comments: * This character isn't exactly unoptimized. You should have no problems with holding your own in a fight. * In order to get this out (I'm on lunch) I'll have to regrettably skip your background and assume it's cool. [COLOR=#ffff00][I]NOT YET[/I][/COLOR]... you'll need to look at the Power Attack issue but you're pretty close. [/QUOTE]

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