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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Aura" data-source="post: 6256686" data-attributes="member: 6747658">Reviewing Rhas IroneyesAll my usual caveats: This is a non-judge review, I don't like directly editing character sheets unless I'm really sure of the correction, and I occasionally make mistakes (just let me know if I do.)OK, this is looking pretty close to completion. I'm going to make exception to the background which you're still working on, and just focus the mechanics. Found a few things to look at:Stuff That Needs Fixin':* Both references I find on the Handy Harversack (Core and Ultimate Equipment) puts the weight at 5 lbs, not the 2 lbs you cite.* I get a total Perform roll of -1, basically just CHA modifier.Stuff That Could Be Changed:* With low CHA and only one point in by 5th level, Intimidate doesn't seem very useful. Obviously, if you want it, no problems.Notation Issues and Typos:* The Knowledge: Planes skill at +7 seems to be completely out of place, like from another character.* Took me a while to figure out the competence bonuses to attack and perception from the bracers. Something to clarify the source would be helpful, but not required.* You may find it worth noting the situational Point Blank +1 attack/damage bonuses.* I'm pretty sure this is a simple omission: Darkvision isn't listed, and I think you still have it.Comments:* Character generation comes in spurts for some reason. Just got DT's and seeing a couple behind you.* This is a character type I've entertained on a number of occasions and never quite played. My last iteration was a halfling. The game lets you give it a go, albeit at an increased feat cost.* I find it odd to put a heavy shield in a Handy Harversack. The rules are vague on the issue, but I'm just not sure how you'd get it in the mouth for the magic to take effect.* LaiTai died? I didn't know that.* The first thing I thought when I saw the picture is 'he's a tall Dwarf'. Seems you found a picture to match what you wanted to do when I read the background.* Player notes is almost like code. I think I know that code. Heh.Anyway, NOT YET, but some very quick changes (and a few suggestions) and you're good to go.</blockquote>

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