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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Aura" data-source="post: 6257230" data-attributes="member: 6747658">Reviewing Umthirin HammerfistThis is my non-judge review of Umthirin. I try to avoid editing your character sheet directly, with the exception of the most obvious typos. I do my best to be accurate, if you think I'm mistaken on an issue feel free to point it out. Happiness guaranteed or your money back.Stuff That Needs Fixin':* I can't seem to find a reference of shuriken doing 1d4 damage. I think they're only 1d2.* Melee Unarmed Attack and Flurry of Blows have been corrected to have no bonus from the amulet. However, the lines both look like they should still total +7 for normal, +7/+7 for flurry, not just +6.Stuff That Could Be Changed:* I love Rockstepper Racial Trait for Dwarves. I was just wondering if you still wanted the Feather Step Slippers considering you already have Rockstepper?* You can have that dagger made of cold iron for a paltry +2 GP. Might be worth doing.* For regional tongue, assuming you don't come from Venza, you might consider Sethir.Notation Issues and Typos:* It's worth noting the Cloak of Resistance in the equipment section is +1.* The DEX bonus listed in Shuriken FOB doesn't seem correct, I think it should be +2. However, the final total of the line is still accurate. Similarly, I'm thinking the regular Shuriken attack shouldn't have TWF listed as a modifier, but the total is correct there as well.Comments:* Another day, another dwarf. They're very popular, lately.* This character has so many situational combat stats… oh my.* Looks like a solid character, although monk mechanics make me double check just about everything. They're kinda intricate.* I actually like seeing a skill list with non-relevant, only usable while trained, skills removed. So much easier to look at.* And ya, needs background work. I know you're on it. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />NOT YET, but very few changes need be made to get to approval.</blockquote>

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