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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Aura" data-source="post: 6269779" data-attributes="member: 6747658">Reviewing William Hunter<a href="http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/William_Hunter_(SloppyJoe)" target="_blank">http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/William_Hunter_(SloppyJoe)</a>This is a non-judge review of Sloppy Joe's character, William Hunter. I don't generally directly edit your work unless I'm really sure it's just a typo or omission. Instead, I point out potential problems. Finally, I sometimes make mistakes, despite all good intentions. If so, just point it out.A 6.5% sales tax will be added to New York customers.Potential Problems:* I get a cost of 6 gp for 3 normal daggers (you had 3 gp).* I get a cost of 10.25 gp for 5 arrows with alchemal silver (you had 15 gp).* I'm pretty sure the following skills are usable trained only: Linguistics, Sleight of Hand, Spellcraft and Use Magic Device.* Similarly, the following seem to be lacking ACP modifier and should have it: Ride, Sleight of Hand, Stealth.Notation Issues/Typos:* You might want to note the Point Blank Shot bonuses in your Weapon Statistics section so it doesn't get forgotten.* Although unusable at this point, I think the base for Use Magic Device should be 0 (Charisma modifier.)* Fixed an apparent typo in Flatfooted AC where you mis-entered 4 pts from armor. The total is still correct.Suggestions:* You have an INT of 14 and may choose up to two other languages. BTW, Common is also Low Landellian, so don't pick that. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />* My favorite arrow load for lowbie archers is 20 cold iron and 20 blunt silver. Options to hit just about anything, and never take a -1 damage for silver.Commentary:* Thistle Arrows seem seem to be allowed, although they seem a little over strong for the price compared to blood crystal arrows. I really didn't know they were in allowed sources until now.* Ex-military characters are not as common, which I find odd considering it's a valid place to get combat training.* I've been mulling a Sniper rogue, but never tried it. I have far more character ideas in my head than time to play. Sadness.Anyway, NOT YET, but a few quick fixes and you'll be good.</blockquote>

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