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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Aura" data-source="post: 6272154" data-attributes="member: 6747658">Reviewing Ungajinga (by Bojingo)<a href="http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/Ungajinga_(Bojingo)" target="_blank">http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/Ungajinga_(Bojingo)</a>Welcome to LPF. I'll be doing a non-judge review for you. A character is approved for play upon getting two approvals (at least 1 from a judge). I do the best I can to be accurate, but if you think I made a mistake just let me know. Finally, I don't tend to edit characters much, but instead list out things for you to look at.Don't taunt Happy Fun Ball.Potential Problems:* I don't see that you have selected a Favored Class. Doing so will give you either +1 HP or +1 skill point every time you level in that class, including your first level, should you pick Barbarian. The most convenient place to note down your FC election is in Racial Abilities. You'll find a spot for FC bonuses to in both your skill point and your hit point calculation.* Your skill section is rather undeveloped. Your skill point total (3) is correct, but at the top you'll want to show the math. And it's worth the time to go through your skills usable while untrained and note what your base stat and total is. Some people do actually delete skills that they cannot use untrained, such as Knowledges.* Your class abilities section also needs some development, although you are not required to copy whole sections of text from the rules book. If you prefer, just note which class features you have and give a short summary of the effects.Notation Issues/Typos/Calculated Values:* I get that you have 14 HP, instead of the 12 you list:--12 from your hit die (which is max at 1st level regardless of what choice you make for your Hit Dice) and 2 from your Con.* I get a total of +5 CMB. I think you may have assumed a base value of 10 like CMD. Think of it as CMB is like attack (and adds to a d20), and CMD is like AC (and adds to 10).* You might want to clarify, under class, that you're a Barbarian (Invulnerable Rager).* It's worth noting your waterskin is full when at a weight of 4 lbs.* Good news: STR bonus damage with a 2h weapon is multiplied by 1.5. I get 2d6+6 with your Earthbreaker.* I get different prices on your sub-1gp items: Chalk 0.01 (1 cp), Fish hook 0.1 (1 sp), Oilx2 0.2 (2 sp) and 10 sling bullets 0.1 (1 sp). Each silver is 1/10 a gold. The total expenditure I get is 132.41gp, leaving 17.59 gp change, or 17 gp, 5 sp, 9 cp.Suggestions:* Piercing and slashing weapons take a -1 damage penalty when silvered. You might be interested in a silver light mace at nearly the same price as the kukri, but without the penalty. Alternatively, a cold iron kukri would be 16 gp and not take the damage penalty, either.Commentary:* At age 34, half orcs are already middle aged. Did you intend this? (I'm not sure about what happens to your stats in that case, but I suspect that they still stand as is. I think I've seen elder characters in LPF.)* Seems like a solid character. Earthbreaker is an unusual weapon choice. Have fun with it. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />Anyway, so NOT YET on the approval, but a great start.</blockquote>

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