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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Aura" data-source="post: 6315053" data-attributes="member: 6747658">Reviewing JaggoThis is a non-judge review of Jaggo by skydreamz. For play, to approvals are necessary, at least one by a judge. With my reviews, I only edit your character sheet for the most obvious of typos; for the most part I point out things to correct and let you have a go at it. And with any comment, I am not infallible--if you think I have made a mistake, just let me know.Overview: Mostly solid with only a few issues. Some layout issues, etc, are noted.Potential Problems:* In order to get 2 skill points, you seem to have taken your base skill points (2), applied Int modifier (-2), applied the minimum 1 rule, and then added one for favored class benefit. It is unclear to me if this order of modifier application is considered correct--this is the first time I've come across it. I'm going to just point this out and look for a Judge statement on this issue.Notation Issues/Typos/Calculated Values:* Character level is noted as 'level, and should be 1.* Need to include dagger and javelin in the Weapon Statistics section.* Total Fly skill seems to total to +1 compared to the 0 noted.Suggestions:* Might want to include text describing how Power Attack increases as BAB increases.* A bit more detail on background would be appreciated, but not absolutely required.* You can streamline your saving throws by simply renaming misc modifiers to the source, instead of double noting as was done.* Might want to describe your tattoo's, either in a specific or generalized fashion.* If you express gear costs <1 GP fractionally, the columns are a little easier to add. Ex: 1 sp = 0.1 gp. However, gear seemed correct.Comments:* Character seems solid overall.* Another Paladin for the recent paladinic explosion. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />NOT YET, pending the resolution of the skill point issue per a Judge. It will also give time for you to consider the Notation Issues and Suggestions.</blockquote>

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