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<blockquote data-quote="Aura" data-source="post: 6366157" data-attributes="member: 6747658">Well, Francis, welcome to LPF. I'll start a review of your character.First look: FrancisThis is a *very* quick once-over to give you something to work on until I can do more. A few issues I spotted in my initial examination of your character are:(1) Languages: either you're one language over, or you're choosing a regional Language (Old Landellian). If the latter, you'll want to specify where you are from.(2) CMB should have your size modifier (-1) figured in, as well.(3) Dagger attack (melee) appears to total +0 (but is listed as -1).(4) Feats: I don't see where you're getting a second feat.(5) Gold Weight: From all that I can tell, we let people skate on carrying coin unless ridiculous amounts are involved.(6) Encumberance brackets: Don't forget to multiply your weight limits by x3/4 for your small size, for a 20 / 40 / 60 -ish distribution.(7) Two things that should weigh less because of the x1/4 small size modifier on gear: Backpack (0.5) and Rations (1.25). However, rope doesn't change with size, so it's 5 lbs.Good luck.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Aura, post: 6366157, member: 6747658"] Well, Francis, welcome to LPF. I'll start a review of your character. First look: Francis This is a *very* quick once-over to give you something to work on until I can do more. A few issues I spotted in my initial examination of your character are: (1) Languages: either you're one language over, or you're choosing a regional Language (Old Landellian). If the latter, you'll want to specify where you are from. (2) CMB should have your size modifier (-1) figured in, as well. (3) Dagger attack (melee) appears to total +0 (but is listed as -1). (4) Feats: I don't see where you're getting a second feat. (5) Gold Weight: From all that I can tell, we let people skate on carrying coin unless ridiculous amounts are involved. (6) Encumberance brackets: Don't forget to multiply your weight limits by x3/4 for your small size, for a 20 / 40 / 60 -ish distribution. (7) Two things that should weigh less because of the x1/4 small size modifier on gear: Backpack (0.5) and Rations (1.25). However, rope doesn't change with size, so it's 5 lbs. Good luck. [/QUOTE]

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