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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Aura" data-source="post: 6367252" data-attributes="member: 6747658">Second Look: Francis John IIIAlright, I went about and cleaned up some minor issues, mostly iteration math things:(1) CMB and CMD each increased by one with your Str.(2) The total cost column was updated to 149.1gp, which matches your accounting in Finances.(3) I changed Fly to 3, from 5. Unless I'm missing something, I am pretty sure 3 is correct.(4) I put the character Location as Dunn Wright Inn, hyperlinked. (This gets changed as your character goes adventure to adventure.) I preserved the 'passed out on the floor' text as a new line at the bottom of your character story and wrote it as a standalone sentence. Feel free to modify/move/rewrite as you see fit.Language: The basic idea behind the bonus regional language is a bribe to help develop the world. So yes, you can have a bonus regional language, but can we have a name of village, and some combination of information (size, location, description, etc) that helps 'put it on the map'?Bluff Skill: Bluff is the kind of skill that can run the gamut of almost worthless to completely overpowered, depending on the individual DM. As the newest judge, I haven't quite gotten the feel for the LPF standard yet, but I personally would remind it is not mind control.Anyway, things look in order enough for:STAMP! Francis has his first APPROVAL for LPF!At this point I'd let you know you can enter the DWI and begin roleplaying there, but the point is a little moot. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" /> Anyway, just decide how you want to handle the language issue and what you'd like to do with the 'passed out on the floor' ditty and you should be good.</blockquote>

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