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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Aura" data-source="post: 6396152" data-attributes="member: 6747658">Reviewing SiddhartaI made some minor edits as part of the pre-approval process:[sblock=Disclosure]Made it clear FC was in skill points and increased total points to 2; corrected Ride skill to 3 (DEX 5, -2 ACP); corrected weight carried to 92 pounds; clarified that longbow attack is using Deadly Aim; fixed tag in Adventures Page and moved to DWI[/sblock]Misc Items of Interest (no particular order):- Background: Looks fine. The first sentence of the third paragraph looks like it's missing a clause or phrase there, as if what you were thinking didn't quite make it into the final version. You might want to take a look.- Appearance: 'Perfect physical specimen' is rather an odd way of describing someone with such divergent physical statistics, particularly Str 20 and Con 8. Offhand, I'm not even sure how to reflect that, to be honest.- Languages: I don't see a likely candidate language for someone from the civilized lands of the western continent. There is 'barbarian' tongue, Jira'shae, but that doesn't seem to fit the feel of Buloxi as laid out in the background. This leads to whether or not a new language can be contrived, or an existing language can be considered equivalent. Checking on that.- Stats: The most literal description of Siddharta's stats is mini-maxed--either putting in lots of points or taking out lots of points. While I'm not going to hold up approval for such a thing by any stretch, I would recommend against that, particularly in context of a class with a weak will save and Wis 7.STAMP! Siddharta is APPROVED. Enjoy! (If you end up having any post approval mechanical edits, just let me know I'll do a double-check.)Question to the other judges: I assume there is still room to develop at least a couple major languages for people from the Western Continent? Or do they speak variants of already detailed languages? I looked at the languages thread and it didn't seem to get addressed.</blockquote>

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