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<blockquote data-quote="GlassEye" data-source="post: 6411657" data-attributes="member: 40413">Aszar Kzolp review1) The value of your items comes to 98.5 gold.&nbsp; This should leave you 51 gold 5 silver instead of the total you have on your sheet.&nbsp; I notice you have a light horse but none of the gear necessary to ride a horse, such as saddle, bit &amp; bridle, etc.&nbsp; I would recommend a saddle and you might need an exotic saddle.2) The weight of your 5 spears is incorrect throwing off your carried weight.&nbsp; A spear weighs 6 lbs so five of them are a hefty 30 pounds of weight.&nbsp; That puts carried weight at 54 lbs.&nbsp; Unfortunately, carrying capacity isn't listed.&nbsp; That should be added.3) The finances block just shows coins carried.&nbsp; I'm not sure if you copied the template from an older character or deleted part of it.&nbsp; The part that is missing helps judges when they do the character checking at level up.General Comments:4) I notice all your weapons are two-handed or ranged.&nbsp; I would recommend something like a dagger, just in case you get grappled.5) Characters that rarely speak and keep to themselves are difficult for others to roleplay with as they don't often give other characters anything to react to.&nbsp; I would ask that you reconsider this, at least for those characters you adventure with.Gold total and weight carried (#1 &amp; 2) should be fixed.&nbsp; I couldn't do it as I was checking it because for some reason I am unable to edit template boxes from my work computer.&nbsp; Sorry.&nbsp; #3 would be helpful to be restored to the template base but isn't vital at this moment (it will have to be added at the end of your first adventure).&nbsp; The other things are suggestions/recommendations.So, a couple of minor fixes.&nbsp; NOT YET APPROVED.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="GlassEye, post: 6411657, member: 40413"] Aszar Kzolp review 1) The value of your items comes to 98.5 gold. This should leave you 51 gold 5 silver instead of the total you have on your sheet. I notice you have a light horse but none of the gear necessary to ride a horse, such as saddle, bit & bridle, etc. I would recommend a saddle and you might need an exotic saddle. 2) The weight of your 5 spears is incorrect throwing off your carried weight. A spear weighs 6 lbs so five of them are a hefty 30 pounds of weight. That puts carried weight at 54 lbs. Unfortunately, carrying capacity isn't listed. That should be added. 3) The finances block just shows coins carried. I'm not sure if you copied the template from an older character or deleted part of it. The part that is missing helps judges when they do the character checking at level up. General Comments: 4) I notice all your weapons are two-handed or ranged. I would recommend something like a dagger, just in case you get grappled. 5) Characters that rarely speak and keep to themselves are difficult for others to roleplay with as they don't often give other characters anything to react to. I would ask that you reconsider this, at least for those characters you adventure with. Gold total and weight carried (#1 & 2) should be fixed. I couldn't do it as I was checking it because for some reason I am unable to edit template boxes from my work computer. Sorry. #3 would be helpful to be restored to the template base but isn't vital at this moment (it will have to be added at the end of your first adventure). The other things are suggestions/recommendations. So, a couple of minor fixes. [color=yellow]NOT YET APPROVED.[/color] [/QUOTE]

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