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<blockquote data-quote="Aura" data-source="post: 6554179" data-attributes="member: 6747658">Reviewing Barlo Hawkins (perrinmiller)Leveled-up characters make my eyes cross and it's getting a bit late. Let's take a look at the Jamir-inspired bard. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)"&nbsp; data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />Things That Need Fixing* I get Barlo's finances to be considerably (~4000gp) overspent. In the main body, I get 49927gp. Add in the stuff on the horse (546gp) and living expenses (100gp), and it all comes to 50573gp. Some Minor Edits I made* Acrobatics seems to only total +16, as opposed to the stated value +17.* The value of 9d8 HP updated to 56, although the hit point total does not change. Missing Text* There is a ^ notation in the combat section for his +2 to trip, but it isn't attached to anything. I'll leave it to you to format as you please.Things I Learned* 55 DMC and this social monster can be yours.* Seeking lost friend or family is never a bad motivation. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)"&nbsp; data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />NOT YET, although the finances seems to be the only issue. Check that out and see what you get.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Aura, post: 6554179, member: 6747658"] Reviewing Barlo Hawkins (perrinmiller) Leveled-up characters make my eyes cross and it's getting a bit late. Let's take a look at the Jamir-inspired bard. :) Things That Need Fixing * I get Barlo's finances to be considerably (~4000gp) overspent. In the main body, I get 49927gp. Add in the stuff on the horse (546gp) and living expenses (100gp), and it all comes to 50573gp. Some Minor Edits I made * Acrobatics seems to only total +16, as opposed to the stated value +17. * The value of 9d8 HP updated to 56, although the hit point total does not change. Missing Text * There is a ^ notation in the combat section for his +2 to trip, but it isn't attached to anything. I'll leave it to you to format as you please. Things I Learned * 55 DMC and this social monster can be yours. * Seeking lost friend or family is never a bad motivation. :) [COLOR=#ffff00][I]NOT YET[/I][/COLOR], although the finances seems to be the only issue. Check that out and see what you get. [/QUOTE]

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