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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Aura" data-source="post: 6608111" data-attributes="member: 6747658">Reviewing Aelspeth NoromielThis is a judge review of Aelspeth. It is given in good faith; should you agree with any assessment let me know and we will work it out. Although I have a lot of practice, I do make mistakes. This said, the good news is I found no mechanical issues that require significant reworking on your part. Note the commentary and suggestions may lead you to minor changes.Edits I made:* Noted move is encumbered to 20’ while retaining base 30' move.* Removed Dimensional Steps (you can copy/paste it from old version when you get to level 8).* Edited Char_Info_DIV fields to reflect your character, so you appear normally on the Adventures page (instead of a Kalgor clone.)* Corrected gold spent on directly carried gear to 268.68 gp and adjusted totals to reflect the change.Suggestions and Comments:* You don’t have to take +1 HP as your favored class bonus every level as implied by the way you wrote it. You can pick and choose as you level up.* And you could have a longbow instead of a crossbow, if you like. Takes less time to reload and you have the money for it.* We’re not sticklers for height/weight overall here at LPF, but I’d remind you at almost 6 feet tall, 101 pounds is going to look positively emaciated. (Human BMI equivalent of 13, where severely underweight starts at 17.5.) I’d go with the book recommended value of 111 pounds.* The only place you refer to the horse’s name is ‘Total on Kasmir’, if you wanted to add it somewhere else.* So is this horse pulling a cart and being ridden at the same time? I'm not sure if the tack and harness setups really allow for both. Additionally, I'm not sure if the horse is strong enough or how encumbered it might be, since you're mixing different types of loads.Aelspeth has her first APPROVAL of two needed for regular LPF play. (With the caveat that it's unclear how you're intending to use your horse and if the horse is up to the task, but the horse, cart, and saddle are all legitimate purchases.) At one approval, you may enter the Dunn Wright Inn, interact with any PC's / NPC's there, and await the soon-coming low level adventure.</blockquote>

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