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<blockquote data-quote="ealt" data-source="post: 6728299" data-attributes="member: 6795047"><p><u><strong>Reviewing Rak'tan Veragni</strong> </u></p><p></p><p>Forewarning, I'm human, and I occasionally make mistakes. If I did so, please let me know so I can correct it.</p><p></p><p><u>TO DO LIST</u></p><ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">I'm assuming you'll want to choose Fighter as your Favored Class. If so, you need to choose your Favored Class Bonus; either +1 HP or +1 Skill Point</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">The max ranks you can put into a single skill is equal to your level, you had put two ranks in Intimidate and Perception. I reduced these to one, this leaves you with two ranks left to spend on other skills </li> </ul><p></p><p><u>THINGS I DID</u></p><ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">I marked your untrained class skills, and removed the plus 3 bonus from them that you had calculated in. You do not receive the bonus until you put at least one rank in that particular class skill</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Changed your speed in armor from 30' to 20' (Scale Mail)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Lots of minor formatting stuff</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">A Greatsword does 1d10 damage, not 2d6. I also added in your Strength bonus on attack and damage rolls with the greatsword</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Added Armor Proficiency</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Slight changes to Trait wording for clarity</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Added Armor Check Penalty to applicable skills, added ability scores to skills, noted source of skill bonuses</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Fixed finances to account for Carried Gear</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Corrected Carrying Capacity</li> </ul><p></p><p><u>THINGS TO CONSIDER</u></p><ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Consider deleting the parts of the template that your class does not use (i.e. spells, Class 2 stuff). If you need them in the future you can add them back in</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Consider fleshing out the background some more. Deeper backstories make for more interesting characters <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" /></li> </ul><p></p><p><em><span style="color: #FFFF00">NOT YET</span></em> fix the skills and favored class bonus and then you'll have my approval</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="ealt, post: 6728299, member: 6795047"] [U][B]Reviewing Rak'tan Veragni[/B] [/U] Forewarning, I'm human, and I occasionally make mistakes. If I did so, please let me know so I can correct it. [U]TO DO LIST[/U] [LIST] [*]I'm assuming you'll want to choose Fighter as your Favored Class. If so, you need to choose your Favored Class Bonus; either +1 HP or +1 Skill Point [*]The max ranks you can put into a single skill is equal to your level, you had put two ranks in Intimidate and Perception. I reduced these to one, this leaves you with two ranks left to spend on other skills [/LIST] [U]THINGS I DID[/U] [LIST] [*]I marked your untrained class skills, and removed the plus 3 bonus from them that you had calculated in. You do not receive the bonus until you put at least one rank in that particular class skill [*]Changed your speed in armor from 30' to 20' (Scale Mail) [*]Lots of minor formatting stuff [*]A Greatsword does 1d10 damage, not 2d6. I also added in your Strength bonus on attack and damage rolls with the greatsword [*]Added Armor Proficiency [*]Slight changes to Trait wording for clarity [*]Added Armor Check Penalty to applicable skills, added ability scores to skills, noted source of skill bonuses [*]Fixed finances to account for Carried Gear [*]Corrected Carrying Capacity [/LIST] [U]THINGS TO CONSIDER[/U] [LIST] [*]Consider deleting the parts of the template that your class does not use (i.e. spells, Class 2 stuff). If you need them in the future you can add them back in [*]Consider fleshing out the background some more. Deeper backstories make for more interesting characters :) [/LIST] [I][COLOR="#FFFF00"]NOT YET[/COLOR][/I] fix the skills and favored class bonus and then you'll have my approval [/QUOTE]
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