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<blockquote data-quote="Aura" data-source="post: 6788735" data-attributes="member: 6747658">Zinnelis Laediril (KahlessNestor)This is a good faith review of the submitted character. If you feel I've made any errors, feel free to point them out and we'll work it out. Major Issues:* NoneMinor Fixes/Edits:* Fixed typo in CMB, no effect on character ability.* Corrected Char_Info_DIV so automations (Adventures page, for example) will work properly.* I used brackets for the conditional modifiers in the skill sections, as opposed to parentheses for the the always applicable modifiers. See if you like this.Comments:* Just listing ‘Favored Enemy’ bonuses in the Weapon Statistics section is good enough for now, but may need specification when you have two or more favored enemies, as you level. Personally, I think it’s enough of a global modifier to just list for all attacks at the end of the section.* If you’re going to alter the format to left-justify the items in Combat Statistics, one thing that might help readability would be to bold the items along the left side. I’m not sure how it would look, but it’s a bit hard to read right now.Zinnelis has his first APPROVAL of two needed for LPF play. He is free to introduce himself in the Dunn Wright Inn thread and await adventure, interact with any PC's or NPCs there, etc.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Aura, post: 6788735, member: 6747658"] [U]Zinnelis Laediril[/U] (KahlessNestor) This is a good faith review of the submitted character. If you feel I've made any errors, feel free to point them out and we'll work it out. Major Issues: * None Minor Fixes/Edits: * Fixed typo in CMB, no effect on character ability. * Corrected Char_Info_DIV so automations (Adventures page, for example) will work properly. * I used brackets for the conditional modifiers in the skill sections, as opposed to parentheses for the the always applicable modifiers. See if you like this. Comments: * Just listing ‘Favored Enemy’ bonuses in the Weapon Statistics section is good enough for now, but may need specification when you have two or more favored enemies, as you level. Personally, I think it’s enough of a global modifier to just list for all attacks at the end of the section. * If you’re going to alter the format to left-justify the items in Combat Statistics, one thing that might help readability would be to bold the items along the left side. I’m not sure how it would look, but it’s a bit hard to read right now. Zinnelis has his first [COLOR=#00ff00][I]APPROVAL[/I][/COLOR] of two needed for LPF play. He is free to introduce himself in the Dunn Wright Inn thread and await adventure, interact with any PC's or NPCs there, etc. [/QUOTE]

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