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<blockquote data-quote="GlassEye" data-source="post: 6793052" data-attributes="member: 40413">Welcome to LPF, BlueLotus!&nbsp; Glad to have you.&nbsp; This is my review of Levanna.&nbsp; Hopefully we can get her approved and in adventure soon!If I mention something in error, let me know and we can work out what the difficulty is.To be fixed:Background: Decide whether open or closed.&nbsp; If open, DMs can use your background when planning adventures, etc.&nbsp; If closed, it's off limits.Language: In addition to Common +4, Levanna will also get a free regional language (probably Middle Landellian but options are <a href="http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/Language" target="_blank">here</a>).Cantrips: Levanna doesn't get cantrips of Divination and Necromancy.&nbsp; This needs to be noted on the sheet.Arcane School: Levanna's Conjuration specialization powers (Summoner's Charm &amp; Acid Dart) are not noted on her sheet.Suggestions:Language: As far as I can tell, Undercommon has never been used.&nbsp; I don't even think we have agreed whether or not we have an Underdark-styled area to E'n.&nbsp; You might be better off selecting a different language.Armor: Haramaki is cheap and light and gives a +1 bonus to AC.Cash: You have 42 gp after the refund for your spellbook.&nbsp; I recommend spending it on a dagger (good for eating with &amp; stabbing goblins in the eye) and other bits of possibly useful minor gear.Minor edits:Image adjustment for readability and other minor formatting edits.Corrected CMB from +1 to -1.Your first spellbook is free.&nbsp; Cost adjusted.Fix those few items mentioned above and she will be ready.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="GlassEye, post: 6793052, member: 40413"] Welcome to LPF, BlueLotus! Glad to have you. This is my review of Levanna. Hopefully we can get her approved and in adventure soon! If I mention something in error, let me know and we can work out what the difficulty is. To be fixed: [b]Background:[/b] Decide whether open or closed. If open, DMs can use your background when planning adventures, etc. If closed, it's off limits. [b]Language:[/b] In addition to Common +4, Levanna will also get a free regional language (probably Middle Landellian but options are [url=http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/Language]here[/url]). [b]Cantrips:[/b] Levanna doesn't get cantrips of Divination and Necromancy. This needs to be noted on the sheet. [b]Arcane School:[/b] Levanna's Conjuration specialization powers (Summoner's Charm & Acid Dart) are not noted on her sheet. Suggestions: [b]Language:[/b] As far as I can tell, Undercommon has never been used. I don't even think we have agreed whether or not we have an Underdark-styled area to E'n. You might be better off selecting a different language. [b]Armor:[/b] Haramaki is cheap and light and gives a +1 bonus to AC. [b]Cash:[/b] You have 42 gp after the refund for your spellbook. I recommend spending it on a dagger (good for eating with & stabbing goblins in the eye) and other bits of possibly useful minor gear. Minor edits: Image adjustment for readability and other minor formatting edits. Corrected CMB from +1 to -1. Your first spellbook is free. Cost adjusted. Fix those few items mentioned above and she will be ready. [/QUOTE]

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