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Message: <blockquote data-quote="FrancisJohn" data-source="post: 6854461" data-attributes="member: 6778347">Hey welcome to LPF! This is my first non-judge character review, so you get to be the guinea pig. Sorry Scott, I think I beat you to this one! So here is the punchlist:1. I think you might have an extra language. 2 Race, 1 Region, 5 INT. I counted 9 instead.2. Maybe add the dagger range somewhere.3. Maybe add DC to spells because the spell focus feat changes a few.4. A masterwork backpack is a good stopgap until we can all afford the handyhaversack. You have the gold, so maybe its worth a look.5. I like your background, but you can always add more details!6. Maybe consider changing your background status to open? It allows the GM to use bits of your character's history in the game. I've found it really draws you in as a player.7. Add the mention that you picked the Foresight school, and what your opposition schools are. I didn't seem them.8. Maybe get rid of the instructions under the headings?9. I believe that some of the traits under Ultimate Campaign are not all approved, but I might be wrong. I've always ended up limiting myself to those found in the APG, and ignoring the campaign section.10. Remember to keep in mind to update the First Seen and Location once gameplay starts.11. I like keeping track of all the choices in the Level Up section for level 1 too, just as a handy point of reference.12. I appreciate the compliments on my character sheet formatting. I spent a considerable amount of time on them, but figuring out the tabber was tricky at first. Feel free to steal as much as you want, and let me know if you have any questions.13. Most important thing, Abramac (cool name) seems REALLY squishy. The low low DEX and CON and HP means he almost seems like he could fall with just one attack. To quote [MENTION=6747658]Aura[/MENTION], he might lose in fight to a house cat.So current approval status: Not Yet</blockquote>

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