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<blockquote data-quote="FrancisJohn" data-source="post: 6882030" data-attributes="member: 6778347">@<a href="http://www.enworld.org/forum/member.php?u=72507" target="_blank">Deepthought</a>Things I did:1. Cleaned up the &lt;span&gt; tags..... I don't think they worked as you intended.2. You never added your FC point for 1 HP or 1 Skill rank. I took the liberty of adding to bluff, so you can get the +3 from a class skill. Please feel free to change this if you want!3. Cleaned up the skill section a bit otherwise... 4. Cleaned up the level up section5. A few very minor edits.6. Cleaned up equipment section. Converted everything to gp instead of other coins. Gave you a scroll case for your parchment in your backpack. (didn't think that would really go in a belt pouch) Double checked all gold and weight values. Itemized everything singly.7. You are medium encumbered, so I changed your speed and had to unfortunately add -3 for your ACP in the skills.So the skinny:You have your first approval!(Let us know if want to change that extra FC point to something else instead of bluff. Oh, and I'm sure the judges are going to need you to find a suitable picture!)</blockquote>

[QUOTE="FrancisJohn, post: 6882030, member: 6778347"] @[I][B][U][URL="http://www.enworld.org/forum/member.php?u=72507"]Deepthought[/URL][/U][/B][/I] [U]Things I did:[/U] 1. Cleaned up the tags..... I don't think they worked as you intended. 2. You never added your FC point for 1 HP or 1 Skill rank. I took the liberty of adding to bluff, so you can get the +3 from a class skill. [I]Please feel free to change this if you want![/I] 3. Cleaned up the skill section a bit otherwise... 4. Cleaned up the level up section 5. A few very minor edits. 6. Cleaned up equipment section. Converted everything to gp instead of other coins. Gave you a scroll case for your parchment in your backpack. (didn't think that would really go in a belt pouch) Double checked all gold and weight values. Itemized everything singly. 7. You are medium encumbered, so I changed your speed and had to unfortunately add -3 for your ACP in the skills. [U]So the skinny:[/U] [B]You have your first approval![/B] (Let us know if want to change that extra FC point to something else instead of bluff. Oh, and I'm sure the judges are going to need you to find a suitable picture!) [/QUOTE]

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