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<blockquote data-quote="Ath'kethin" data-source="post: 7695989" data-attributes="member: 6798775">This stuff happens to all of us; I seem to have an eagle eye for typos and grammatical errors on absolutely everything&nbsp; - except my own writing, of course.&nbsp; There, I'm blind as a bat.&nbsp; It's a good idea to read a page out loud to yourself if you don't have a second pair of eyes to go over it for you.&nbsp; Not that I ever do, but it's still a good idea.Anyway, what I noticed: &quot;. . . invitation FORM one of the occupants.&quot;&quot;. .&nbsp; .advantage on rolls against EFFECT that turn undead.&quot;&quot;. . . while in bat or WOLD form . . .&quot;&quot;. . . in WOLD form . . .&quot;&quot;obeying HI SSPOKEN word . . .&quot;&quot;His statistics, other than size and speed are unchanged.&quot;&nbsp; Either needs another comma or to have the one already there removed.That's all I see for errors, and I imagine you caught most of them on another pass.&nbsp; You might want to tighten up some of your phrasing though.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Ath'kethin, post: 7695989, member: 6798775"] This stuff happens to all of us; I seem to have an eagle eye for typos and grammatical errors on absolutely everything - except my own writing, of course. There, I'm blind as a bat. It's a good idea to read a page out loud to yourself if you don't have a second pair of eyes to go over it for you. Not that I ever do, but it's still a good idea. Anyway, what I noticed: ". . . invitation FORM one of the occupants." ". . .advantage on rolls against EFFECT that turn undead." ". . . while in bat or WOLD form . . ." ". . . in WOLD form . . ." "obeying HI SSPOKEN word . . ." "His statistics, other than size and speed are unchanged." Either needs another comma or to have the one already there removed. That's all I see for errors, and I imagine you caught most of them on another pass. You might want to tighten up some of your phrasing though. [/QUOTE]

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