Comments on my site?

[CRGreathouse]

I'm trying, I'm trying. As you may and may not know, I'm working on writing more generators for my site ( http://mwtools.thyle.net/ ), so I'm kinda busy.

Races: Remove my parenthetical notes from the Limbant's descriptions (or it sounds very silly); otherwise perfect

Spells: Clean up 2E references. 3rd level: "Saves versus fear magic" -> "Will saves" (3x), "Save versus spells" -> "Will save" (4x), remove "Save as a Mage", "Guardian familiars attack and make Saves", "Guardian familiars attack and make Saves as per as monsters" -> "Guardian familiars have BAB as a fighter", "Save vs. Spells" (about orks) -> "make a Will save", "Save vs. Spells" (about toads) -> "Fortitude save", " Save vs. Spells" (about dampening) -> "save", "Save vs. Spells" (about lycanthropes) -> "make a Fortitude save", "Save V,S spells" -> "Will save", "Save vs. Spell" (phantasmal fingers) -> "Will save", "Save vs. Normal fire" -> "Reflex save", "Save vs. Spells" (shroud of cyrin) -> "Reflex save", "Save: negates" (ghoul arrow) -> "Save: Reflex negates", "Save vs. Paralysis" -> "make a Fortitude save", "Save: ½" (heat lightning) -> "Save: Reflex half", " Save vs. Lightning" -> "make a Reflex save", "Save: special" (icebolt) -> "Save: Reflex partial", "Saves vs. Petrification" (icebolt) -> "Reflex save", "also vs. Petrification" (icebolt) -> "Reflex save", "Save vs. Crushing blow" (icebolt) -> "Fortitude save", "Save vs. Magical frost" (icebolt) -> "Fortitude save", "Save: special" (lightwall) -> "Reflex negates", "Save vs. Petrification" (lightwall) -> "Reflex save", "Save vs. Magical fire" (lucent lance) -> "Reflex save", "Save: negates" (Bands of Sirellyn) -> "Save: Reflex negates", "Save vs. Spell" (Bands of Sirellyn) -> "Reflex save" (x2), "Save vs. Petrification" (Bands of Sirellyn) -> "Fortitude save", "Save: ½" (lance of disruption) -> "Save: Reflex half", "Save vs. Spell" -> "Reflex save", "Save: ½" (lesser sign of sealing) -> "Save: Reflex half", "Save: ½" (solvent of corrosion) -> "Save: Reflex half" (on its own line), "Save vs. Spell" (solvent of corrosion) -> "Reflex save", "Saves as per vs. Acid" (solvent of corrosion) -> "Fortitude saves", "Save: special" (rolling thunder) -> "Save: Reflex partial or Fortitude negates", "Save vs. Petrification" (rolling thunder) -> "make a Reflex save", "Save vs. Spells" (rolling thunder) -> "make a Fortitude save" (x2), etc.

Add "(S)" to the Target for lightwall.

 

[jreyst]

aargh...

Man you're right... that's a lot of work.... geez what a pain....

 

[CRGreathouse]

Man you're right... that's a lot of work.... geez what a pain....

That's about 3/4 of the 3rd-level spells. If I have time, I'll finish those up in a day or two. At least we finished most of the low-level spells last time...

 

[Psionicist]

I like it! Good choice about the colors. They are very original compared to most gaming sites! It is also easy to read which is a plus.

I have only ONE problem, and it's not actually a problem. Try fixing the width of the "Active PC's", "NPC's" and "Maps" table on the front page so they are of equal width.

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[Cullain]

Cool site. One nitpick, that hasn't been mentioned yet:

Empyreans: neat idea. but -2 STR and -2 WIS seems like a lot to give up for a +2 CHR and 3x limited charm persons. Makes a great sorcerer, or bard, but not much else. Maybe another minor benefit?


But as I said, just a nitpick. Very cool page.

Cullain

 

[jreyst]

I like it! Good choice about the colors. They are very original compared to most gaming sites! It is also easy to read which is a plus.

I have only ONE problem, and it's not actually a problem. Try fixing the width of the "Active PC's", "NPC's" and "Maps" table on the front page so they are of equal width.

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Cool site. A couple things:

It seems light on DnD stuff. Only two characters as far as I could see, and details only on one of them.

A type at "Resoruce: My own knowledge" on http://psionicist.online.fr/generalfacts.shtml

Also, cool logo, cool background, easy to read. Good job

 

[jreyst]

Table sizes

I have only ONE problem, and it's not actually a problem. Try fixing the width of the "Active PC's", "NPC's" and "Maps" table on the front page so they are of equal width.

Oops! I set the top table with a nowrap td. I'll fix it today

 

[jreyst]

Fixed...

Ok I fixed the tables being different sizes... more comments?

 

[CRGreathouse]

"Save: special" (silverlight) -> "Reflex partial or Fortitude partial", "Save vs. Spells" (silverlight, #1) -> "make a Reflex save", "Save vs. Blinding" -> "make a Reflex save", "Save vs. Spells" (slverlight, #2) -> "Fortitude save", "Save: special" (starfire) -> "Fortitude negates or Reflex half", "Save vs. Petrification" -> "make a Fortitude save", "Save vs. Spells" -> "Reflex save", "Save: negates" (gaseous form) -> "Save: Fortitude negates", "Save: negates" (hold spirit) -> "Save: Will negates", "(Conjuration, alteration, Enchantment)
" (Jamye's Prismatic Snowball) -> "Conjuration (creation)", "Save: special" (Jamye's Prismatic Snowball) -> "See text", "Save vs. Poison " (Jamye's Prismatic Snowball) -> "Fortitude save", "Save vs. Fire" (molten ground) -> "make Reflex saves", "Save: special" (Rathe's Trigger) -> "Save: see text", "save vs. Spells" (sonoric's trance) -> "Will save", "Save: special" (soul safe) -> "Will negates (harmless)", "Save: n/a" -> "Save: none" (x3), "Save: special" (sticky floors) -> "Save: none", "Save: negates" (status) -> "Save: Will negates"

Brains
Transmutation
Range: Touch
Components: V, S, M
Duration: 1 hour per level
Casting time: 1 action
Save: Will negates (harmless)
The recipient of this spell gains a 1d4+1 enhancement bonus to Int.

Conceal Magic: As Nystul's undetectable aura (PH page 232)

 

[jreyst]

Thanks

Hey CRGreathouse- good job. There's so much there that it takes me a while to update. But, I got most of it done last night. Check it out.