2d4 for the rock damage is ok.
Will remove the
magenta question in the next update.
Skills: how about 4 for Spot and Listen and 3 for Jump?
Putting ranks in Jump is unnecessary.
The original flavour text says they "sometimes making leaps as great as 10 feet in distance and clearing over 6 feet in height."
A 6 foot High Jump has a 24 Jump DC, so I gave the Greater Fachan a +10 racial bonus to Jump, which makes Jump +14 with its Strength 18 and allow it to always clear 6 feet by taking 10 on the skill check.
After doing that I realized an issue. DC 24 is enough for a 24 foot Long Jump, while the above text says the long jump clears "as great as 10 feet".
I propose changing the Skill description from the current:
A greater fachan has a +10 racial bonus to Jump checks. It can always choose to take 10 on a Jump check, even if distracted or endangered. A greater fachan's Jump DC is not doubled if it does not get a running start, it can even jump backwards from standing still without the DC doubling.
To:
A greater fachan has a +10 racial bonus to Jump checks. It can always choose to take 10 on a Jump check, even if distracted or endangered. A greater fachan's Jump DC is not doubled when it makes high jumps without a running start, even if it jumps backwards from standing still.
As for the skill ranks, I would divide them between Climb, Listen and Spot like an Ogre.
Maybe 3 ranks in Climb for +7 and four apiece in Listen and Spot for +4, plus whatever racial bonus to Listen we give for the "exceptional hearing" that allows them to hear an approaching horseman from up to 5 miles away.*
The RAW says hearing something five miles away has a –2640 DC modifier to
Listen which is patently ridiculous.
However, the AD&D Great Cats mostly have "surprised only on a 1" like the Fachan. We could borrow numbers from the SRD versions of those. The Leopard has +6 Listen and Spot, the Lion +5 in both and the Tiger a measly +3. Which isn't very impressive, honestly.
Heck, let's just give it a +4 racial bonus to Listen.
*Which is odd, since you'd think the fachan would hear the horse not the man.
