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<blockquote data-quote="Cleon" data-source="post: 7526296" data-attributes="member: 57383">I have no objections to tweaking the second sentence to make it read more &quot;paper like&quot;.How about:If &quot;destroyed&quot; its body and equipment collapses with a loud&nbsp; rustling sound, leaving a crushed ball of paper-like remains that crumble&nbsp; into ash at the slightest touch.No objection to that.I would think it prefers to cast spells and fold origami from a distance while using its creations to tie up its enemies and defend against their attacks.Engaging in melee seems more like the Paper Warrior's final/emergency option than something it aims to do early in a battle.Taller is fine. I'm not so convinced about the heavier. There's no mention that the Paper Warrior's heavily built.If the Shadow Walker's weight bothers you I'd be more inclined to lower it to, say, 160 pounds.Speaking of weight, upon reflection I might like The General to be heavier since it's a muscular warrior type.How about using the following for the three of them:The General stands 6 feet tall and weighs 195 pounds.The Shadow Walker stands 5 feet nine inches tall and weighs 160 pounds.The Paper Warrior stands 6 feet tall and weighs 175 pounds.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Cleon, post: 7526296, member: 57383"] I have no objections to tweaking the second sentence to make it read more "paper like". How about: If "destroyed" its body and equipment collapses with a loud rustling sound, leaving a crushed ball of paper-like remains that crumble into ash at the slightest touch. No objection to that. I would think it prefers to cast spells and fold origami from a distance while using its creations to tie up its enemies and defend against their attacks. Engaging in melee seems more like the Paper Warrior's final/emergency option than something it aims to do early in a battle. Taller is fine. I'm not so convinced about the heavier. There's no mention that the Paper Warrior's heavily built. If the Shadow Walker's weight bothers you I'd be more inclined to lower it to, say, 160 pounds. Speaking of weight, upon reflection I might like The General to be heavier since it's a muscular warrior type. How about using the following for the three of them: The General stands 6 feet tall and weighs 195 pounds. The Shadow Walker stands 5 feet nine inches tall and weighs 160 pounds. The Paper Warrior stands 6 feet tall and weighs 175 pounds. [/QUOTE]

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