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<blockquote data-quote="Cleon" data-source="post: 7535728" data-attributes="member: 57383">Good oh! I'll include the changes in this update.The Paper Warrior is an &quot;It&quot; not a &quot;He&quot;. I've tried to consistently describe the Seven Swords as sexless since they're undead (except for a few bits of description where they appear human.That reminds me, I need to correct a few &quot;his&quot; and &quot;hes&quot; in the previous conversions.I'm not sure about the &quot;ample use of his quill pen's confusion effect.&quot;As far as ample use goes I think it'd better apply to its origami ability.How about…The Paper Warrior makes ample use of its origami creations to harass enemies and&nbsp; defend itself while casting spells. If forced to melee it tries sowing chaos among its attackers with its quill pen's confusion effect.Updating the <a href="http://www.enworld.org/forum/showthread.php?p=6908201#post6908201" target="_blank">Paper Warrior Working Draft</a>.Updating the <a href="http://www.enworld.org/forum/showthread.php?p=6524963#post6524963" target="_blank">The General Working Draft</a>.Updating the <a href="http://www.enworld.org/forum/showthread.php?p=6705104#post6705104" target="_blank">Shadow Walker Working Draft</a>.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Cleon, post: 7535728, member: 57383"] Good oh! I'll include the changes in this update. The Paper Warrior is an "It" not a "He". I've tried to consistently describe the Seven Swords as sexless since they're undead (except for a few bits of description where they [I]appear[/I] human. That reminds me, I need to correct a few "his" and "hes" in the previous conversions. I'm not sure about the "ample use of his quill pen's [I]confusion[/I] effect." As far as ample use goes I think it'd better apply to its origami ability. How about… The Paper Warrior makes ample use of its origami creations to harass enemies and defend itself while casting spells. If forced to melee it tries sowing chaos among its attackers with its quill pen's [I]confusion[/I] effect. Updating the [URL="http://www.enworld.org/forum/showthread.php?p=6908201#post6908201"][B]Paper Warrior Working Draft[/B][/URL]. Updating the [URL="http://www.enworld.org/forum/showthread.php?p=6524963#post6524963"]The General Working Draft[/URL]. Updating the [URL="http://www.enworld.org/forum/showthread.php?p=6705104#post6705104"]Shadow Walker Working Draft[/URL]. [/QUOTE]

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