Cleon
Legend
Works for me.
Like this?
Lightning (Su) #1: A stargazer can unleash two 30 ft lines of electricity from its eyes, which do 6d6 electricity damage each (DC X Reflex save halves). The stargazer can attack with lightning three times (six lines of lightning) before it exhausts its internal electrical charge. It recharges its lightning power by basking in light (restoring one twin-line lightning attack requires 1d4+1 rounds in full sunlight or 2d4+2 rounds in lamplight or torchlight). The save DC is Constitution-based.
I'd rather the recharge times were longer, but I can live with that.
Anyhow, Freyar supports no overlapping and I'm OK with that, so should we change it to:
Lightning (Su) #2: A stargazer can unleash two 30 ft lines of electricity from its eyes, which do 6d6 electricity damage each (DC X Reflex save halves). These lines of lightning cannot overlap. The stargazer can attack with lightning three times (six lines of lightning) before it exhausts its internal electrical charge. It recharges its lightning power by basking in light (restoring one line of lightning requires 1d4+1 rounds in full sunlight or 2d4+2 rounds in lamplight or torchlight). The save DC is Constitution-based.
I'm also wondering about whether to allow single line attacks:
Lightning (Su) #3: A stargazer can unleash two 30 ft lines of electricity from its eyes, which do 6d6 electricity damage each (DC X Reflex save halves). These lines of lightning cannot overlap. A stargazer can unleash a single line of electricity (from either eye) if it only wishes to attack one target. The stargazer's internal electrical charge can produce six lines of lightning (three twinned lightning attacks) before it exhausts its storage capacity. It recharges its lightning power by basking in light (restoring one line of lightning requires 1d4+1 rounds in full sunlight or 2d4+2 rounds in lamplight or torchlight). The save DC is Constitution-based.