Coupon Layout Design: what do you think?

[FoolishFrost]

Here's a test design I did with PagePlus 10. I was wanting to get some opinions. It's generally going to be an online coupon design.

The file is a 133 KB PDF, so let me know if you need a plain image instead.

http://www.ancient-awakenings.com/singlepages/Ad-Dryden.PDF


Is it eye-catching?
Does it look clean?
Does it do the job is was intended to?
Any way to improve on it?

I love thinkering with this stuff!

Later,

 

[TheAuldGrump]

Looks good, but you may want to say how much the user is saving off of the list price by using the coupon.

And the book itself looks interesting as well.

The Auld Grump

 

[Dimwhit]

I agree with Grump--you should mention how much the user is saving. Other than that, looks good.