Creative Exercise: The Sovereign Dominion of Eyros

Rystil Arden said:
5 pages of posts in 50 minutes, not bad. By the way guys, we now have 42 pages of single-spaced text when I put this in my Word-Processor. I'll do the NPC and Timeline updates soon.

~Rystil

We really need to do some work compressing/organizing this information; the compilation is too long to be useful. If people could more easily sift through the information there, it would help a lot to avoid misunderstandings.

Organization suggestions (for people organizing information, silly):

Tag usage

Chapter Headings
Chapters should be bold and underlined to makes them stand out clearly. Chapters are such things as "Politics," "Religion" and "Prominent NPCs."

Major Sections
Major Sections should be in bold. Example topics for the "Races" chapter could be "Elves," "Dwarves" and "Orcs."

Subsections
Subsections should be italicized. Example topics from the "Elves" section would be "Role in society" and "Masks."




P.S.: Someone set up a wiki for us to use, and we should use it.
 

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That would be nice, but actually transforming the contributions so that they fit into such headings would take a lot of work (plus I don't really want to make too many changes to contributions when I compile them, preferring to keep them mostly verbatim). I think that at this point, we should save off breaking up everything and rewriting it (because it would probably require a rewrite to do that categorisation) for the PDF.

I agree that it is hard to find things (Remember: I waded through this to place every single post from the last five pages ^^), but the Edit->Find command helps quite a bit. The problem is that sometimes facts about the same topic need to be split across multiple headings, and contributions have to be split (which I have done a few times manually). The best compromise, in my opinion, allowing us to keep the original wording of the contributors more or less intact, is to keep it as is for now and just make separate unofficial updates for things that are used a lot (i.e. NPCs and timeline). Eventually, the rest will be reorganised as part of the production process.

That's just my opinion. If anyone has any good ideas, though, I look forward to hearing them!
 

I agree. However, certain things have gotten so long that I'm leery of wading in to the reams of international politics, mythology, & demons. There's just so much there that I never really absorbed.

And that's someone who spent the time to catch up from page 1 when the thread was 11 pages long.

One thing that might be fixed in-thread is flagging the individual Pillars and cities of Eyros a little better. They're pretty hard to track down without a search.

Ack. In any case, I think doing a little writing for this project would be fun. Count me as an applicant if more are needed.
 

Khorod said:
I agree. However, certain things have gotten so long that I'm leery of wading in to the reams of international politics, mythology, & demons. There's just so much there that I never really absorbed.

And that's someone who spent the time to catch up from page 1 when the thread was 11 pages long.

One thing that might be fixed in-thread is flagging the individual Pillars and cities of Eyros a little better. They're pretty hard to track down without a search.

Ack. In any case, I think doing a little writing for this project would be fun. Count me as an applicant if more are needed.
If you like, I can do a short write-up for each of the Pillars, but other than Eyrdeyn and maybe Mhur and Malarn-ka, even I have trouble keeping those cities straight (I actually find the foreign countries easier).

Vajar: Orcish Pillar. Descends from Vajaros Dragonbane. Dark secret- Hobgoblin blood in the distant past (Vajaros's paramour Lazkani). Many rulers have Vajar as their orcish Pillar.

Zhal: Orcish Pillar. Descends from ? Seems to have lots of tough members who protect Eyros by hunting down renegade races


Taljik: Orcish Pillar. The newbies who replaced Garren. They have a planned arena in the works, but not much else to be said.

Garren: Orcish Fallen Pillar. They all died except Ramu (who is safe in Alivia's pendant) during the War of the Crumbled Pillar, which they precipitated. They also once looked to the sea, including the Grand Admiral of Eyros amongst their numbers

Malarn: Human Pillar. Wealthy scholars, House Malarn scions descend from the sage Malani. They have cornered several forms of trade, including the Gharjuin trade with the Sarynthi, using this to help finance their Great Library. They believe in meritocracy and tolerance for other races, allowing those of great merit to become honourary members (like Kalis).

Kiron: Human Pillar. Merchants who descended from the Hero Kira, House Kiron members have embraced the faith of the Children of the Dawn. Because of this, they believe that the elves should be free, and thus they freed their Masks and even accepted elven wives, creating half-elven scions and even one elf wizard scion who has been raising eyebrows.

Mulcibe: Human Pillar. Passionate artists and craftsmen who descended from Mulcibia, who was loved by the eladrin Kampaetnos, they have vibrant red-gold hair, which causes some to make remarks comparing their hair to that of zombies.
 

You know, spells in the PH that are named after Greyhawk mages can simply use the names from the System Reference Document. The SRD replaces the names of the mages with either a word like Mage or simply removes the name with no replacement.

BTW, how do we add stuff to the Eyros wiki at Wikipedia? How would we go about that? I've been using Wikipedia for a while as my favorite online encyclopedia, but I dunno how to contribute to it.
 

Arkhandus said:
You know, spells in the PH that are named after Greyhawk mages can simply use the names from the System Reference Document. The SRD replaces the names of the mages with either a word like Mage or simply removes the name with no replacement.

BTW, how do we add stuff to the Eyros wiki at Wikipedia? How would we go about that? I've been using Wikipedia for a while as my favorite online encyclopedia, but I dunno how to contribute to it.
Yup, that is another solution. But it would be a fun flavour addition to throw in our own Eyros NPCs. Still, I see no reason to force the issue on this official thread, so I put the list up on the less-official Rules Thread.

P.S. No idea how to contribute to Wiki, but that would be a neat place to put the NPC Encyclopaedia, especially with names in the text as links to the other NPCs.
 

Wiki!

Rystil Arden said:
P.S. No idea how to contribute to Wiki, but that would be a neat place to put the NPC Encyclopaedia, especially with names in the text as links to the other NPCs.


I'm currently setting up the wiki (just making pages and posting the info from the compilation.) I'll post again when I'm done.
 

Minor note, I altered a line in my contribution of Cururultar, since I had forgotten before someone pointed it out again that the gnomes had gotten the humans and orcs to make war on the elves. I changed it to say that Cururultar inspired the elves to their original conquest of the region long ago, and then the humans and orcs to continue their conquest after taking Eyrdeyn and such.

Contribution:
Long ago the Kohl'Tass taught a group of Eyrians the Discipline of Nature's Grasp, the unarmed fighting style long practiced by Kohl'Tass since they are oathbound to wield no weapons in their homeland. The Discipline emphasizes grappling and throws, as well as hand strikes, but the lizardfolk couldn't teach their human and orc disciples the claw, tail, and bite techniques. This fighting art and its introspective philosophy spread gradually in Eyros and was quickly adapted to different forms as the students became teachers, and a few small schools of the resultant martial arts have been built in various cities and towns across Eyros. The Eyrians altered the philosophy nearly as much as the fighting style, and now call it the Dragon's Way, but each school teaches its personal variation of the style and philosophy, so for instance the school in lower Eyrdeyn teaches Dragon's Way of the Bold Fist. Exercises and disciplines taught by the Dragon's Way, not to mention self-defense skills, are popular amongst the peasantry and some nobles, but teaching the art to dwarves or elves is forbidden in Eyros.
 

Wiki?

Abisashi said:
I'm currently setting up the wiki (just making pages and posting the info from the compilation.) I'll post again when I'm done.

Is this thread in the public domain? Putting it on wikipedia makes it so.
 

Abisashi said:
Is this thread in the public domain? Putting it on wikipedia makes it so.
Umm...I dunno. I think it is. Better ask Mouse before doing anything. I would think this is public domain (being in a public forum), but the polished PDF version would not be.
 

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