LoneWolf23
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Okay, I like the sample of deities for D&D 4e, and while I don't mind the "gods sprung from the Astral Sea to fight the Primordials born of the Elemental Chaos" motif, I prefer the Mythology presented in my favorite sourcebook from the 3.5 era, Green Ronin's The Book of the Righteous. So naturally, I got to thinking about how to combine the two. Here's what I figured out so far...
The Universe was created by the Nameless One, an omnipotent Creator god, who emerged from the Elemental Chaos, then formed a massive sphere containing the Astral Sea. He then formed the World at the center of the sphere, along with the stars and planets around it. The tools he used to create the sphere and the world, after being touched by his power, gained a life of their own, becoming the Primordials.
The Nameless One then gathered some Fire from the Chaos, and created Kador in his image. He then gave will to the Earth, the Sky and the Waters. He entrused Kador with the responsibility to grant the fire of souls to all living things, gave him a prophecy, and withdrew from Creation. Kador tricked the Earth, Sky and Waters into gathering fully into gods, and granted fire to the newly born deities Rontra, Urian and Shalimyr.
Rontra and Shalimyr united to create Eliwyn, the Tree of Life. The Tree became the source of all plant-life in the world, and then bore five fruits. Four of them gave birth to the Gods of the Tree: Terak, god of War; Tinel, god of Magic; Morwynn, Goddess of Mercy; and Zhenkeef, goddess of Inspiration. Kador, thinking himself superior to the others, desired the fifth fruit for himself, but was denied it. He cursed the fruit, and instead of forming a deity, it produced a multitude of smaller creatures, the Divs.
Angered at the defiance of the other gods, Kador turned to the Primordials, who dispised the sphere of Creation, seeing it as an abomination in their realm, and desiring to return it to primal Chaos. Kador joined with them, rejecting his old name to become Tharizdun, taught them how to create the Titans and Archons to form their armies, and unleashed them upon the young world. The Old Gods, the Gods of the Tree, and the Divs quickly banded together, and after a long, brutal war, pushed the invading Primordials beyond the Sphere of Creation. Tharizdun was trapped in unbreakable chains, and tossed into the depths of the Elemental Chaos. There, his foul presence corrupted all he touched, and spreading outwards, formed the Abyss, a dark chasm of taint that eternally spirals out from around him.
One of the Divs, Asmodeus, was ambitious and ruthless, and sought to overthrow the gods to replace them. He tricked Terak and Tinel into waging war on one another, starting the War of the Gods. While the gods warred, Asmodeus retrieved Tharizdun's Regalia of Power, and used it to gain power equal to the gods themselves. Still, he bided his time, waiting in secret and gathering allies amongst the Divs, while Terak and Tinel mustered their armies. Finally, the two warring brothers slew one another in a final strike, and Zhenkeef lept upon their funeral pyre in a fit of madness. From this was born Mormekar, god of Death. Morwynn convinced Mormekar to allow the other gods to be reborn, and she agreed to become his wife. From their union was born Morgaine, whom mortals call the Raven Queen.
As the newborn (and reborn) gods grew, Morwynn took the most loyal and noble of the Divs and made them into the Celestial Host of Angels, proud servants of the gods. She then discovered the cause of the madness of the gods, and upon their reaching adulthood, convinced them to reject the taint within their own souls, casting it out into a prison they would call Hell. She then gave the gods three laws: One, that the gods would never wage war against one another again; Two, that the gods would use their strength to guide the div and the new races ripening in Eliwyn's fruit; and Third, that no one god would rule the others; as the eldest, she would lead, but could not order the others to obey.
Meanwhile, Asmodeus had gathered a host of Div of his own, choosing his lieutenants amongst their greatest champions. This army, he called "Divils" which would later become the word "Devils". He then unleashed his army upon the gods, forcing them to violate their first law to fend him off. After a brutal, destructive war, the gods defeated Asmodeus and trapped he and his armies within Hell, hopefully for eternity.
Afterwards, there was peace for some time. Morwynn took Terak as her second husband, and together they had the gods Bahamut, Bane, and Erathis. Tinel took Zhenkeef as his wife, and together they had Avandra, Corellon, Ioun, Lolth and Zehir. Zhenkeef was not faithful to her husband, however, and cuckold him with Shalimyr, giving birth to Melora and Tiamat. She also took on Morwynn's appearance and slept with Terak, and from this illicit union came forth Kord and Gruumsh. Urian sought no mate, but instead tore out his own eyes and gave them life, forming Pelor, the Sun, and Sehanine, the Moon. And from Rontra's womb came Torog and Moradin.
Many of the remaining Div grew restless, having been used and abused in every war of the gods. They rose up against the gods, but were put down by the celestial host. The gods then took the rebellious Div tribes, the Djinn and Ifrit, and banished them into the Elemental Chaos. The third tribe, the Shee, had never participated in any war, and were spared this judgement. The gods created a mirror of the world for them to inhabit, and thus the Feywild was created, and inhabited by those who would become the Fey.
Now, originally in The Book of the Righteous, there are no Primordials, and Kador eventually becomes Asmodeus. But this works out nicely, and makes Tharizdun even more epic as a deity of evil, while maintaining the 4e concept of Asmodeus being a former angel (or Div, as the case is here) who aspired to become a god himself. Also, the "Gods of the Womb" in BotR are different deities entirely, in smaller numbers. But most of them match Core deities closely enough that there's no real problem in replacing them, save some gender switches here and there.
Now, there's more to the mythology to adapt, but my first hurdle involves the second batch of fruits from Eliwyn ripening to form the mortal races. In the original book, the fruits form the Dwarves, Gnomes, Halflings and Humans (Elves being descendants of the Shee who chose mortality). But I was thinking of a different approach for 4e, making the fruits spawn Precursor races which would later produce the races we know today.
My ideas involved:
-The Adama: forerunners of humans, halflings, illumians, shadar-kai, the gith and other such humanoid races
-The Grendel: forerunners of orcs, goblins, ogres, trolls and other such brutal races, having been corrupted by evil early on.
-The Dweomer: forrunners of dwarves, gnomes and, somehow, goliaths.
-the fourth fruit would not have produced a race of it's own, having been torn up and eaten by numerous animals. These would form the beastmen races: gnolls, minotaurs, shifters, lizardfolk and the like.
-The Shee would produce the eladrin, elves and drow.
The fifth fruit would not have ripened and fallen, and such is yet to produce any progeny.
The tieflings would've come about the usual way, while the dragonborn would be creations of the dragons, themselves descended from the Div.
...I'd like some feedback before continuing this work, though.
The Universe was created by the Nameless One, an omnipotent Creator god, who emerged from the Elemental Chaos, then formed a massive sphere containing the Astral Sea. He then formed the World at the center of the sphere, along with the stars and planets around it. The tools he used to create the sphere and the world, after being touched by his power, gained a life of their own, becoming the Primordials.
The Nameless One then gathered some Fire from the Chaos, and created Kador in his image. He then gave will to the Earth, the Sky and the Waters. He entrused Kador with the responsibility to grant the fire of souls to all living things, gave him a prophecy, and withdrew from Creation. Kador tricked the Earth, Sky and Waters into gathering fully into gods, and granted fire to the newly born deities Rontra, Urian and Shalimyr.
Rontra and Shalimyr united to create Eliwyn, the Tree of Life. The Tree became the source of all plant-life in the world, and then bore five fruits. Four of them gave birth to the Gods of the Tree: Terak, god of War; Tinel, god of Magic; Morwynn, Goddess of Mercy; and Zhenkeef, goddess of Inspiration. Kador, thinking himself superior to the others, desired the fifth fruit for himself, but was denied it. He cursed the fruit, and instead of forming a deity, it produced a multitude of smaller creatures, the Divs.
Angered at the defiance of the other gods, Kador turned to the Primordials, who dispised the sphere of Creation, seeing it as an abomination in their realm, and desiring to return it to primal Chaos. Kador joined with them, rejecting his old name to become Tharizdun, taught them how to create the Titans and Archons to form their armies, and unleashed them upon the young world. The Old Gods, the Gods of the Tree, and the Divs quickly banded together, and after a long, brutal war, pushed the invading Primordials beyond the Sphere of Creation. Tharizdun was trapped in unbreakable chains, and tossed into the depths of the Elemental Chaos. There, his foul presence corrupted all he touched, and spreading outwards, formed the Abyss, a dark chasm of taint that eternally spirals out from around him.
One of the Divs, Asmodeus, was ambitious and ruthless, and sought to overthrow the gods to replace them. He tricked Terak and Tinel into waging war on one another, starting the War of the Gods. While the gods warred, Asmodeus retrieved Tharizdun's Regalia of Power, and used it to gain power equal to the gods themselves. Still, he bided his time, waiting in secret and gathering allies amongst the Divs, while Terak and Tinel mustered their armies. Finally, the two warring brothers slew one another in a final strike, and Zhenkeef lept upon their funeral pyre in a fit of madness. From this was born Mormekar, god of Death. Morwynn convinced Mormekar to allow the other gods to be reborn, and she agreed to become his wife. From their union was born Morgaine, whom mortals call the Raven Queen.
As the newborn (and reborn) gods grew, Morwynn took the most loyal and noble of the Divs and made them into the Celestial Host of Angels, proud servants of the gods. She then discovered the cause of the madness of the gods, and upon their reaching adulthood, convinced them to reject the taint within their own souls, casting it out into a prison they would call Hell. She then gave the gods three laws: One, that the gods would never wage war against one another again; Two, that the gods would use their strength to guide the div and the new races ripening in Eliwyn's fruit; and Third, that no one god would rule the others; as the eldest, she would lead, but could not order the others to obey.
Meanwhile, Asmodeus had gathered a host of Div of his own, choosing his lieutenants amongst their greatest champions. This army, he called "Divils" which would later become the word "Devils". He then unleashed his army upon the gods, forcing them to violate their first law to fend him off. After a brutal, destructive war, the gods defeated Asmodeus and trapped he and his armies within Hell, hopefully for eternity.
Afterwards, there was peace for some time. Morwynn took Terak as her second husband, and together they had the gods Bahamut, Bane, and Erathis. Tinel took Zhenkeef as his wife, and together they had Avandra, Corellon, Ioun, Lolth and Zehir. Zhenkeef was not faithful to her husband, however, and cuckold him with Shalimyr, giving birth to Melora and Tiamat. She also took on Morwynn's appearance and slept with Terak, and from this illicit union came forth Kord and Gruumsh. Urian sought no mate, but instead tore out his own eyes and gave them life, forming Pelor, the Sun, and Sehanine, the Moon. And from Rontra's womb came Torog and Moradin.
Many of the remaining Div grew restless, having been used and abused in every war of the gods. They rose up against the gods, but were put down by the celestial host. The gods then took the rebellious Div tribes, the Djinn and Ifrit, and banished them into the Elemental Chaos. The third tribe, the Shee, had never participated in any war, and were spared this judgement. The gods created a mirror of the world for them to inhabit, and thus the Feywild was created, and inhabited by those who would become the Fey.
Now, originally in The Book of the Righteous, there are no Primordials, and Kador eventually becomes Asmodeus. But this works out nicely, and makes Tharizdun even more epic as a deity of evil, while maintaining the 4e concept of Asmodeus being a former angel (or Div, as the case is here) who aspired to become a god himself. Also, the "Gods of the Womb" in BotR are different deities entirely, in smaller numbers. But most of them match Core deities closely enough that there's no real problem in replacing them, save some gender switches here and there.
Now, there's more to the mythology to adapt, but my first hurdle involves the second batch of fruits from Eliwyn ripening to form the mortal races. In the original book, the fruits form the Dwarves, Gnomes, Halflings and Humans (Elves being descendants of the Shee who chose mortality). But I was thinking of a different approach for 4e, making the fruits spawn Precursor races which would later produce the races we know today.
My ideas involved:
-The Adama: forerunners of humans, halflings, illumians, shadar-kai, the gith and other such humanoid races
-The Grendel: forerunners of orcs, goblins, ogres, trolls and other such brutal races, having been corrupted by evil early on.
-The Dweomer: forrunners of dwarves, gnomes and, somehow, goliaths.
-the fourth fruit would not have produced a race of it's own, having been torn up and eaten by numerous animals. These would form the beastmen races: gnolls, minotaurs, shifters, lizardfolk and the like.
-The Shee would produce the eladrin, elves and drow.
The fifth fruit would not have ripened and fallen, and such is yet to produce any progeny.
The tieflings would've come about the usual way, while the dragonborn would be creations of the dragons, themselves descended from the Div.
...I'd like some feedback before continuing this work, though.