Destiny's Tears OOC Thread- Prologue: A Jewel in the Shadow

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Abdiel is complete.

I have updated his description and personality, and added a background.

Let me know what you think.

By the way, the Mojiin avenger is FreeXenon's character, Mhrazhar D'el. Seeing as I cannot imagine that there are that many Mojiin wandering around Eldiz, I thought it would be better if they knew each other (in case FreeXenon also joins us). I checked with FreeXenon to make sure that this would not bother him.
 

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Eonthar said:
Abdiel is complete.

I have updated his description and personality, and added a background.

Let me know what you think.

By the way, the Mojiin avenger is FreeXenon's character, Mhrazhar D'el. Seeing as I cannot imagine that there are that many Mojiin wandering around Eldiz, I thought it would be better if they knew each other (in case FreeXenon also joins us). I checked with FreeXenon to make sure that this would not bother him.
Actually, there are no fewer Mojiin in Eldiz than any of a large number of other races...
 

Rystil Arden said:
Actually, there are no fewer Mojiin in Eldiz than any of a large number of other races...

Really? I would have thought that with their link to Arris, and their inability to reproduce, that there would not be that many of them in Eldiz, since fewer of them would wish to settle down in a large city.

I guess their draconic minds work in mysterious ways ;)
 

Eonthar said:
Really? I would have thought that with their link to Arris, and their inability to reproduce, that there would not be that many of them in Eldiz, since fewer of them would wish to settle down in a large city.

I guess their draconic minds work in mysterious ways ;)
Well they are in the list of rarer races, for sure, there are no more than fifty or sixty of them in the entire metropolis, but they are there, and there are a bunch of other races that are just as rare and weird-looking, so they certainly aren't common, but they aren't really an oddity.

I read your history, and I really like it. Its an elegant Preserver concept who is content to explore. Minor change--the Preservers do not teach that the Valsians must be destroyed, that's the Avengers. The Preservers do teach that the Valsians are evil, but the Preservers believe that the Valsians' own evil will bring their own demise, and that the Mojiin should just endure and protect Arris and wait for that time.
 

Rystil Arden said:
I read your history, and I really like it. Its an elegant Preserver concept who is content to explore.

Thank you, the reason it took me so long to get a history done is that I was looking to find a reason for a Mojiin Preserver to leave Arris - and not want to go back there ASAP.

Rystil Arden said:
Minor change--the Preservers do not teach that the Valsians must be destroyed, that's the Avengers. The Preservers do teach that the Valsians are evil, but the Preservers believe that the Valsians' own evil will bring their own demise, and that the Mojiin should just endure and protect Arris and wait for that time.

I have modified my history to reflect this fact.
 

Eonthar said:
Thank you, the reason it took me so long to get a history done is that I was looking to find a reason for a Mojiin Preserver to leave Arris - and not want to go back there ASAP.



I have modified my history to reflect this fact.
Okay cool, I've listed your character as complete now in the first post of this thread.

As to motivation, yeah its a toughie. Soem of the playtesters for this adventure arc wanted to play Mojiin, but they couldn't come up with a good reason to have one out there. I think that yours is internally consistent, and I'll bet that they wished they had come up with it :)
 




Rystil Arden said:
Wait, what isn't covered for all the nymphs? I tried to stay pretty standard in the format of my nymphly descriptions.

Yes but some of them where group together and could be expanded upon as individuals. ;)

I'll do some work on my PC tonight but It will probably be till Wednesday before I'm done.
 

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