Rystil Arden
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I think Mastery of the Mind died a horrible death/became renamed because it became redundant with the new stuff that also has a Comprehend effect. Don't worry about it--the Comprehend should be on the speech Emotion Control now, and I believe it is.Hand of Vecna said:Since it overrides your normal senses, ESP already has aspects of the Distracting flaw, so it can't be applied.
My only issue with her "Lesser Polylgot" is that, if that's trying to go for a "be understood by as many people as possible with only four languages" thing, then it should have Arabic, English, Mandarin Chinese, and Spanish [or English, Hindustani, Mandarin Chinese and Spanish, depending on who you ask]. If it's just the "she speaks lots of languages" thing, it's cool as-is (though I would ask why it's in amongst her powers, as an Enhanced Skill, rather than being an actual skill). Not knowing the concept behind that power, I don't know which is more appropriate.
I'd also ask what "Mastery of the Mind" (mentioned under her Languages, and which seems to imply some sort of Comprehend effect) is, since it's not listed anywhere under her Powers.
Speaking of "not knowing the concepts behind her stuff," I'd say Circe's lack of background/history/"fluff" text is her biggest impediment to being approved. As is, she's just a block of stats, and a block of stats is not a character. It's fine to not want the PC's to know, but the Judges do need to know this, and it's your responsibility to make sure we have that information, either by e-mailing all the Judges, or just posting it in an sblock in the char post (perhaps with a note saying "Judge's Eyes Only" or somesuch).
The reason why Lesser Polyglot is in powers is because she doesn't actually speak the languages without the power, and I'm going to build up on it when I get more points until it becomes a total Comprehend, but it makes no sense to do that with real skill points because those represent actually learning the languages (in other words, if I upgraded to full Comprehension by reusing the same points put into the normal language skill, it would be like unlearning the languages, which is weird). Plus, she can use Extra Effort to speak other languages with those and exhaust herself, which just seems cool to me.
The Judges make up half the active PCs in LS that aren't me (at least, from what I've seen anyway). Don't worry--I told Bront the fluff. You can grok the character if you know that her archetype/concept is enchantress/sorceress with a Circe theme (kind of like the Resolute Pandora has a sort of Pandora theme

[SBLOCK=Musings on Forcing Public Judge Knowledge of Character Backstories] Sierra is significantly less fun to play if she can't be mysterious. And metagamed ignorance for the sake of consistency is never as fun for anyone as real ignorance (One exchange between Archeville and Sierra was one of my favourites ever in LS, actually, and it stems from the dramatic irony I got from the info D.A. was missing). This is something I do in LEW, actually, and no other judges have had a problem with it--I mean, I have a concept. It's a strongly fluffy one, and I plan on roleplaying it heavily, but I just don't want to tell anyone more than necessary (in LEW, my characters' histories have never been listed to anyone, here I did tell Bront to make sure the background was legit for LS, and it was). I think if you asked people in LEW (particularly in her current adventure) if my character Lasair had a strong personality, backstory, etc, the answer would be a resounding yes.
I guess what I'm saying is--as long as the backstory is allowable, why should anyone need to know it except me, as I slowly reveal it (and in Lasair's case, bits and pieces have been revealed over the OOC years such that it would be possible to determine much of her backstory to a careful reader)?
I'll end with a strong point, since a lot of the above was opinion--Sierra's backstory is a spoiler for Ionian Dreams, which has a judge as a player. It is also a spoiler for my really really cool follow-up to Ionian Dreams that I hope to run if we finish ID. Spoilers to fun plot twists and stories of my adventures are dealbreakers for me--I would rather not run an adventure at all than run an adventure that contained one or more characters whose players have the adventure spoiled[/SBLOCK]