Diplomatic Immunity: Almost Ready Maybe?

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Brother Shatterstone said:
Sure, works for me. :)

Conacian Amazon. I remember they prefer axes but do they prefer spears/javelins or bows for range weapons?
They like spears, but they also use bows for long range--javelins are more of a close-range thing.
 




Unleashed, thanks!

All, I know this is the wrong spot but if you all would help me pick up errors I would appreciate it.

Edit: Removed
 
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Brother Shatterstone said:
Unleashed, thanks!

All, I know this is the wrong spot but if you all would help me pick up errors I would appreciate it.

Note: I didn't do any normal equipment cause I don't see a slave having any... I can fix this if need be.

Also she's probaly too well armed.

Stats...far too high. ;)

Languages look wrong, you should have Concasan + 2 + what you bought (should be 5 languages, not 6).

Greataxe damage, threat range, weight, and cost wrong...should be 1d12+2, 20/x3, 12 lbs., (320 GP)

Armour Spikes should cost 3050 GP

Composite Longbow, attack bonus should be +8, looks like you forgot the masterwork.

Spear, attack bonus should be +6 I think.

Grapple check should be +5 (3 base attack, +2 Str)

Basic equipment...consider a set of clothes, maybe a sack and some rations, at least...weapons, probably a few too many. ;)

Think that's it.
 
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unleashed said:
Stats...far too high. ;)

It didn't look that high till I swapped Strength and Wisdom around.

unleashed said:
Languages look wrong, you should have Concasan + 2 + what you bought (should be 5 languages, not 6).

Thanks, fixed.

unleashed said:
Greataxe damage, threat range, weight, and cost wrong...should be 1d12+2, 20/x3, 12 lbs., (320 GP)

Thanks, but I removed this. (12 lbs is alot of weight for a weapon she would never use.)

unleashed said:
Armour Spikes should cost 3050 GP

Fixed

unleashed said:
Composite Longbow, attack bonus should be +8, looks like you forgot the masterwork.

Yup, sure did. :)

unleashed said:
Spear, attack bonus should be +6 I think.

Ah it depended if it was being thrown or not. Removed anyway and gave her two throwing axes.

unleashed said:
Grapple check should be +5 (3 base attack, +2 Str)

Yeah last minute change regarding strength and what not.

unleashed said:
Basic equipment...consider a set of clothes, maybe a sack and some rations, at least...weapons, probably a few too many. ;)

Weapons yeah to many. I cut ten pounds of and she still has her weapons from home. (bow and axes)

Set of clothes, maybe I guess. Rations, wouldn't that inspire a slave to escape?
 

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