Dreaming All The Time

[Dr Midnight]

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[Dr Midnight]

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[Dr Midnight]

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[Dr Midnight]

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[Dr Midnight]

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[Richards]

Hey Doc, I almost hate to break the narrative flow of your consecutive posts, but you did say (in your first post) you wanted reader feedback, so here goes: I'm enjoying this story immensely! It's great to see you back on the boards, and this particular story has an intriguing concept. I really like the characters of "Lilyboo" and her grandfather, and hopefully he'll be around for awhile yet (he should be at least 87-and-a-half by now).

I wouldn't worry at all about this not being based on an RPG session; as you noted, there's nothing in the rules prohibiting it (and you're not the only one to have done so).

Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading! And welcome back!

Johnathan

 

[Dr Midnight]

Oh man, haha, I actually thought to myself "I wonder if Richards is still around." Glad to know you still are! Ahhh, you're the first person to pop in, and I have this mess spread across multiple sites. It's weird how I need feedback to breathe in a writing environment. Most of the writing advice I see is "ignore the readers, write for you." No! I mean, I'm writing what I want, but without people hanging on for updates, I'm not nearly as motivated.

Now that you've commented, I've got that necessary drive to write the next bit. ...Not chapter 6, that's written, but beyond that. Yayy!

 

[Dr Midnight]

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