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I've been following this story-hour from the beginning as well, and I just wanted to say that it makes for a great read. dmuncheon, you're doing an awesome job with it, and I always look forward to seeing another message in this thread. And if I'm even remotely representative of anything, it likely means that there are loads more lurkers who don't regularly chime in when you're making a headcount of your readers. Good on ya!
 
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Session Twelve, Part Three: The Great Escape

"I found a demon," Dru informed her partner.

Di'Fier paused, his mouth open, his own news momentarily forgotten. "A what?"

"A demon...rat...man." She waved the question of what exactly it was away. "It was trying to get out. It looks unhealthy."

Di'Fier struggled bravely with Dru's rapid train of thought, then gave up and let it race past him. "Where is it?"

"In a wagon. Come on. How was your book?"

"Forget the book," Di'Fier said. "I was walking around the wagons, and I overheard Captain Lydon talking to someone..."

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"...get yer money," Lydon said. "But ye should have told me ye were hirin' help! Girl nearly killed me..."

"But, Captain...I didn't hire anyone."

There was a long moment of silence. Then, quietly, "She damn near ended my sailing days...did you hear that? Someone's coming. Go!"

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"Hey! You can't go back here. We're setting up."

A glint of moonlight on silver. "City Watch."

"...oh. Is there a problem?"

"Probably not."

Dru and Di'Fier strolled past the worker and into the knot of wagons. "That's the one the demon is in," Dru commented loudly, and heads swiveled to look at her.

"Demon?" Di'Fier asked.

One of Lydon's guards hurried over. "That's for the rat chase, you don't want to go in there."

Dru sniffed. "I've already been in there. This is for the rat chase, you say? Nothing...nefarious? Not going to...take over the world with it?"

The guard's mouth opened as he struggled with what to say. Di'Fier stepped in to rescue him. "I'm not going to be in the rat chase. Do you mind if I have a look?"

"Well..." The guard rubbed the back of his neck. "Seeing as how you're the ones who saved the Cap'n, I guess it's OK." He pulled back the flap, and followed the two Watchmen into the tent, turning up his lantern so the trio could see.

The ratman huddled in the corner of its cage, looking warily up at them. Dru could see that its paws - no, hands - were carefully folded over the section of wood it had been scratching away at, hiding it from the guard's eyes. "Where did you get it?"

"The Captain bought it from some traders, said it came from way out west, across the ocean."

"...semis tau..." The rat-thing looked at Dru as if its words could be conveyed by the sheer intensity of its gaze - but the language was none she had ever heard. The guard didn't seem to notice.

"What did it go for?" Di'Fier asked, digging in his pouch for some jerky. He tossed the dried meat in front of the cage, and it promptly vanished.

"A couple of hundred in gold, but the Cap'n wanted something special for the chase this year. Something unique, yeah?"

Dru looked it over. "You got that right. What happens if nobody catches it?"

The guard shrugged. "Nobody gets the prize."

"Huh. Well, thanks." Dru led the way out of the wagon, with Di'Fier just behind. After they had vanished into the maze of alleys, she leaned closer to him. "It tried to talk to us, Di'Fier. It's intelligent."

He nodded. "So it's against the law to enslave it like that. But it's not on the books as intelligent. So..."

"...we free it. Him. I'll buy a cloak to put over it, then you can turn me invisible and I'll slip inside and let him go."

"All right. I'll make a distraction."

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A drunken sailor staggered through the Freeport night, his parrot on his shoulder and a bottle in his hand. The moon was a mere sliver above his head, but he seemed to know his way despite the drink, as he weaved through the collection of wagons.

"Hey! You're not supposed to be back here..."

"Ah, ish all right...I jush, just brought some rum..." Most of it on his clothes, judging from the smell. Even the parrot seemed to be swaying a bit on its perch. "Have a drink."

"Well, if you insist."

The sailor passed over the bottle, belched once, and broke into song. A surprisingly clear baritone rose over the docks in an old longshoreman's shanty that soon had the guards grinning and clapping along.

I didn't know he could sing, thought Dru as she darted across the alley. Even if she was invisible, there was no point in taking chances. Without a sound she boarded the wagon, as the disgused Di'Fier attracted even more attention with his lusty ditty.

As she approached the cage, she could see the rat sniffing the air, looking around to see who was producing this new odor. "Shh, it's me," she said, trying to reassure him. Hopefully he recognizes my voice. "I've come to set you free."

The darkness made picking the lock all the more difficult, but within a few moments it was open, and she swung the cage door wide. As the creature crawled from his erstwhile prison, she handed the cloak to him. He nodded, and draped it around his shoulders, pulling the hood up to discuise his features. Well, almost disguised. But he's definitely intelligent.

As she peeked out of the wagon, she saw trouble. Di'Fier had exhausted his knowledge of dockside shanties and was making a rather miserable attempt at a hornpipe. The guards and workers were drifting away, and one of them was heading straight for their wagon.

"Run," she said, and even if the rat did not understand the word, the urgency in her voice was clear. He darted out the door, Dru pelting along behind him - barely able to keep up, even with the creature as ill as was.

"Hey...HEY! The rat's out! It's loose! HEY!" Footsteps began to follow them: jogging, then breaking into a run.

She reached out, grabbed the rat's arm, and swung him around a corner. "This way!" A few steps took her to one of the grates set into the ground. She knelt and heaved, and with a squeal of protesting iron, it opened. "Down here. Come on."

Dru and the rat-man descended into darkness.

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Di'Fier staggered into an alley, looked about to assure himself that nobody was watching, and let the magic lapse. On his shoulder, Ampiel too resumed his normal appearance. "Well, they got out of there," he said. "Just in time, too. I thought I was going to wet myself." He stepped over to the side of the alley.

As he finished up, an odd odor struck his nose. Freeport - especially the Docks - was full of odd odors, but this one seemed wrong somehow. He peered around the darkened alley, finally calling a globe of light into being to hover above his hand.

From a doorway, a thick, dark trail of liquid ran into the street. Di'Fier stepped forward, the light illuminating what had once been a woman.

She was dressed in gaudy red and gold, such as a performer might wear, but her face had been mutilated beyond recognition. The jacket had been torn asunder along with her chest.

Her ribs were cracked and spread apart.

Her heart was missing.
 
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Doc, I agree with Horacio (as I usually do). You are really coming into your own with your writing style. I really like the way you cut from scene to scene, even going back in time to replay dialogue from a scene. Very effective and a pleasure to read.
 

Vurt, always great to hear from someone new. Thanks for posting! Hopefully some more lurkers will follow your example.

Horacio, you are my favorite French person. (Well, favorite living one anyway - I'm rather fond of Dumas and Edmund Rostand as well.) Your enthusiasm helps keep me writing, because I know you'll read it within half an hour of my posting. :D

Thorntangle, I must admit, a lot of that technique is born from sheer laziness. I only scribble my notes on the highlights of a session, so I have to fill in the rest of it later, from my rather dodgy memory - and sometimes it's not up to the task. Either that or I can't face the idea of writing up three pages of dialogue with Dru and Di'Fier interrogating helpless merchants... (I did that a lot in the "Thirds of Purloined Vellum" writeups, as you'll notice.)

I'm thinking about collecting Book One (after it finishes...just a couple more sessions folks!) and putting it up somewhere for download, if there's interest. I'd probably throw it up as a set of zipped Word files for PC users, a gzipped tar file (text only) for Unix, and a .sit archive of Simpletext files for Macs. Maybe if I can get Di'Fier to draw a couple of pics I'll include those too.

J
 

I can only agree...

I'm thrilled every time I log on and find an update!

And I'd almost forgotten about the bit with the missing hearts.

Are we coming up to the asylum or is it one of the "lost posts". I have to confess that I'm a little confused with the timeline since I know that you've discussed in-game events that haven't yet made it into the Storyhour both here and on the GR boards.

But other than my head reeling a bit trying to follow your multiple plot threads, I have nothing but praise for your efforts.
 

drnuncheon said:
Horacio, you are my favorite French person. (Well, favorite living one anyway - I'm rather fond of Dumas and Edmund Rostand as well.) Your enthusiasm helps keep me writing, because I know you'll read it within half an hour of my posting. :D

Living in France doesn't make me a French ;)
(I'm Spanish :))
But thanks a lot for the flattery :)

I'm thinking about collecting Book One (after it finishes...just a couple more sessions folks!) and putting it up somewhere for download, if there's interest. I'd probably throw it up as a set of zipped Word files for PC users, a gzipped tar file (text only) for Unix, and a .sit archive of Simpletext files for Macs. Maybe if I can get Di'Fier to draw a couple of pics I'll include those too.
J

If you need some place to put them, I have a nice website waiting for your work.
If you give me a week, I can even design a web page to put your story into. Seriously.

Edit: This is my 1111 post!!!!!!
 
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Originally posted by Horacio
Living in France doesn't make me a French :)
(I'm Spanish :))
But thanks a lot for the flattery :)

Well, you're my favorite non-fictional Spaniard then. (Sorry, Inigo Montoya still takes the crown! ;))

I do have web space, so I don't think that will be a problem (unless hundreds of thousands of people go to dwnload it every day...in which case I have a lot more lurkers than I thought!)

Originally posted by Jon Potter
And I'd almost forgotten about the bit with the missing hearts.

I think they had as well. Muahaha...

Originally posted by Jon Potter
Are we coming up to the asylum or is it one of the "lost posts". I have to confess that I'm a little confused with the timeline since I know that you've discussed in-game events that haven't yet made it into the Storyhour both here and on the GR boards.

I understand that, I get confused myself sometimes. The asylum is (at the moment) the last remaining "lost episode" - Dru and Di'Fier have expressed an interest in cooperating to write up the tale, so currently the newspaper clipping is all that's been written. I will throw draining undead at them until they write it. :D

I've got 2 more sessions yet to write up, one of which was a double-length Saturday run. We finish up with Swagfest, and on the day of the ball, Captain Donnach assigns Dru and Di'Fier to help Spruce back at headquarters, so they don't somehow show up for the ball covered in blood...

J
 

Iñigo Montoya? The man who said "I'm Iñigo Montoya, you killed my father, prepare to die" (or at least in Spanish he said something like that)? :D

Well, so if you have webspace, you have no excuse :p
 

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