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Message: <blockquote data-quote="ragboy" data-source="post: 2027130" data-attributes="member: 4151">Rude!  I finished last night and I have to agree. The resolution was pretty well done: Revealing some of the mysteries while setting up the next book with additional questions. I found the final battle scene kinda clunky. I love Story Hours, but I'm not sure if a 'blow-by-blow' style is necessarily the best way to describe the action in a novel, especially when you can hear dice rolling with every sentence. There was enough cool stuff going on that I ignored this little nitpick. I have two comments:  - My next character will have a 'lightsaber' dagger ala Daine. (we'll see if the DM approves)- I would have rather seen the battle [spoiler] between Pierce and the mind flayer or at least more of it. I understand why he did it this way, but it seemed like the big baddy got shafted as far as final confrontation spotlight goes. Maybe he returns in later episodes. [/spoiler] Anyway. Overall an admirable first novel. I look forward to continuing the series. Doesn't Matt's Eberron novel come out next month? They still have the first War-Torn novel coming out in March, too... hmm.</blockquote>