It looks very nice, but.. was there really a need to come up with different words for the compass directions? No, no there was not, particularly when the text uses the real words as well - it's just too confusing.
I can tell you right now that I could play in Castlemourn for 20 years and never be able to parse the following sentence:
Running from Sparruk in the sarrind to Khalandorn in the sekhovynd, a knife-edged ridge (riddled with caverns and clefts) forms the western border of Khalandorn.
I like the racial ideas, and love that elves and half-elves glow.