Elorah Winters Chronicles - World of Twilight (UD 07-01-04)

[ledded]

Wow. Nice work, man!


I've always found it a bit difficult to write a good narrative in first person like this and keep it flowing, but obviously you don't have the same problem.

Keep it up, and consider this one subscribed.

 

[Captain Claymore]

I can't tell you how nice that is to hear, coming from from such a good writer as yourself. Between kids, work and gaming, I've had little time to check back here. Seems like when I do get around this way, I end up reading other people's better work (yes I mean you, along with OldDrewId and Lamprolign.)

Now that I have checked back into my thread, I'll be working on an update I assure you.

Thanks again.

 

[Lamprolign]

ZOMBIES! We loves zombies! With that out of my system, I really like your use of the first person in the narrative. It can be a very difficult style to tell an entire story in, but you seem to be doing very well indeed. I'm looking forward to the next post!

 

[Bryin]

Update? :\

 

[Captain Claymore]

Update? :\

I am so ashamed. I'll try to get something new for you soon. In the meantime you might wish to check out my new Ancient Wisdom thread...

Thanks for caring.