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<blockquote data-quote="Calinon" data-source="post: 1650468" data-attributes="member: 13737">Great pic of Michelle!&nbsp;As for the story, I think the most important aspects are the introduction of Grandmother and Pooky, and the intro's of all the main characters, especially since it sets up Cosmo and Jackal as jerks.&nbsp; The little skirmish at the train station in the airport isn't all that important in the long run, but does set up the two as antagonists.&nbsp;The battle in the train itself is paramount, especially Split and his mercenaries and robots.&nbsp; That is perhaps the most hated Villain I've created; definitely the one everyone seems to want to get most of all.&nbsp;I'm not so sure if the hospital or Doc Johnson is very important, though he's a somewhat recurring character, he has a limited role at best.&nbsp; Sanchez chewing out a lippy Raisa is something nice to include I think, and the greeting at the School would be a good ending of course.&nbsp;The first issue should be fairly easy... um... ok, easy isn't the right word, but storyline-wise, it is probably the easiest to go through.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Calinon, post: 1650468, member: 13737"] Great pic of Michelle! As for the story, I think the most important aspects are the introduction of Grandmother and Pooky, and the intro's of all the main characters, especially since it sets up Cosmo and Jackal as jerks. The little skirmish at the train station in the airport isn't all that important in the long run, but does set up the two as antagonists. The battle in the train itself is paramount, especially Split and his mercenaries and robots. That is perhaps the most hated Villain I've created; definitely the one everyone seems to want to get most of all. I'm not so sure if the hospital or Doc Johnson is very important, though he's a somewhat recurring character, he has a limited role at best. Sanchez chewing out a lippy Raisa is something nice to include I think, and the greeting at the School would be a good ending of course. The first issue should be fairly easy... um... ok, easy isn't the right word, but storyline-wise, it is probably the easiest to go through. [/QUOTE]

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