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<blockquote data-quote="Evil_Dead_Jedi" data-source="post: 4484252" data-attributes="member: 77685">Knight, thanks for the reply.&nbsp; I used EQ1 pics because that's all I play, but also because they give a feel for the world we are playing in.&nbsp;I agree with everything you said.&nbsp; I think hearing it from someone else rather than from my head helped put it in to focus.&nbsp; The module is intentionally rail-roady.&nbsp; I want to keep it short and to the point.&nbsp; Not so much as a complete rp'ing event, but more of getting familiar with some of the more basic mechanics.&nbsp; Hopefully that will work out well.&nbsp; I am defenitely going to have to work on getting rid of the railroad aspect of my writing style though, lol.&nbsp;Another thing I noticed but for some reason have a problem with is keeping my sentences down to a normal length.&nbsp; I tend to draw all of my sentences out too much.&nbsp; I hate that about my writing stye.&nbsp; <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)"&nbsp; data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />&nbsp;I really appreciate the feedback.&nbsp; This is the first RPG adventure I have tried to write in over 10 years.&nbsp; I thought it turned out ok, but the more feedback I get (good or bad), the better it will turn out.&nbsp; And the better I will do in the future.&nbsp; Thanks again, and I want to get MORE feedback from you guys!</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Evil_Dead_Jedi, post: 4484252, member: 77685"] Knight, thanks for the reply. I used EQ1 pics because that's all I play, but also because they give a feel for the world we are playing in. I agree with everything you said. I think hearing it from someone else rather than from my head helped put it in to focus. The module is intentionally rail-roady. I want to keep it short and to the point. Not so much as a complete rp'ing event, but more of getting familiar with some of the more basic mechanics. Hopefully that will work out well. I am defenitely going to have to work on getting rid of the railroad aspect of my writing style though, lol. Another thing I noticed but for some reason have a problem with is keeping my sentences down to a normal length. I tend to draw all of my sentences out too much. I hate that about my writing stye. :) I really appreciate the feedback. This is the first RPG adventure I have tried to write in over 10 years. I thought it turned out ok, but the more feedback I get (good or bad), the better it will turn out. And the better I will do in the future. Thanks again, and I want to get MORE feedback from you guys! [/QUOTE]

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