The pencilwork is nice, but the proportions are rather off. Her head's too small. Though if you stylistically chose to do so, I could see it working. She looks rather brutish with such a large body.
MAANNNNN!, I was HOPING to see a chick in a bikini! JK, good stuff. Mine all come up with heads twice the size of the body, so no worreis. Mine are still fun to laugh at tho.