Jemal
Adventurer
I like the idea of Enoch meeting up with Laura. I think I have an idea on how to do that and endear him to the team at the same time.
See, Laura seems to have gotten herself into a bit of a pickle with a psychic pickup man charming her in Vegas. If only the Team had someone who was versed in the psychic arts.
VR, if you can finish your background off with some reason for being in Vegas, I can write you into the story soon.
BBs, sorry for making you the damsel in distress again.
Also, VR, character looks good, except for the move action on the senses. You've essentially duplicated the 'concentration duration' flaw, With same cost reduction, but made it a move action instead of a standard action. I'd allow it if there were some further quirk to make up for the difference(At same cost), but otherwise I'd request you change the "custom : requires Move action" to the concentration duration.
See, Laura seems to have gotten herself into a bit of a pickle with a psychic pickup man charming her in Vegas. If only the Team had someone who was versed in the psychic arts.

VR, if you can finish your background off with some reason for being in Vegas, I can write you into the story soon.
BBs, sorry for making you the damsel in distress again.

Also, VR, character looks good, except for the move action on the senses. You've essentially duplicated the 'concentration duration' flaw, With same cost reduction, but made it a move action instead of a standard action. I'd allow it if there were some further quirk to make up for the difference(At same cost), but otherwise I'd request you change the "custom : requires Move action" to the concentration duration.
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