Giant by Poll - The Creature Thus Far (recovery effort)

[dhaga]

Suggestions for giant's bag text:

Text looks decent, but may I suggest a slight rewording:

A GIANT's bag usually contains 1d4 throwing rocks, 3d4 mundane items, and the giant's personal wealth. These possessions tend to be muddy or algae-covered, and usually consist of a mixture of fishing gear, woodsman's gear, and tools for weaving nets.

 

[Shade]

Yep, that sounds better. Thanks!

 

[dhaga]

I do like “Living Hill” for the name.

Taking some of Knight Otu’s Swedish words:

Living + Hill:
Levandekulle

Shortened:
Levankul

Backwards and shortened:
Kullev
Kullevan


I think of those, I like Levankul and Kullevan the best…though I’ll admit Kullevan sounds more like the name of an individual than the name of a creature.

 

[Shade]

Added a name poll.

 

[Shade]

Added a tiebreaker poll to determine its name.

I've filled in all the other blanks and wrote a bit of flavor text. Please look it over and let me know what I've missed. If you want to add/revise flavor text, please do so.

We're almost (finally!) done with this big fella.

 

[Shade]

Now that we've got a name, I posted Mr. Glupskulle in Homebrews. Let me know if it needs anything else.

 

[dhaga]

The soft sounds of the slow-moving river is interruped

Just a grammar and spelling correction in the flavor text: should be "are interrupted", as we're talking about the sounds

Otherwise, I think it looks good!

 

[Shade]

Will fix. Thanks!