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Hail people of the boards.

Here I'm presenting a rough concept of creature, akin to a BBEG, I'm concious it needs balancing and polishing(after some serious changes maybe).
So, I'm not only searching for critiques here, but for suggestions.

Aspect of Undeath
Medium Undead
HD: 21d12+21 (158hp)
Initiative: +10
Speed: 40ft, Fly 60ft (Perfect)
AC: 30 (+6 Dex, +6 Natural, +8 Deflection), 24 touch, 24 flat footed
Bab/Grapple: +10/+22
Attack: Claw +22 melee (1d8+18/17-20 plus energy drain)
Full attack: 2 Claws +22 melee (1d8+18/17-20 plus energy drain)
Space/Reach: 5ft/10ft
SA: Create spawn, energy drain, Circle of death (2/day)(DC24), Spell-like abilities
SQ: Augumented critical, Darkvision 120ft, Undead traits, Fast Healing 6, SR 35, Positive energy recistance 10
Saves:Fort +9, Ref +12, Will +15
Abilities: Str 34, Dex 22, Con -, Int 14, Wis 13, Cha 26
Skills: Climb +30, Concentration +24, Hide +30, Move Silently +30, Spot +25, Listen +25
Feats: Improved Toughness, Improved Critical (Claw), Improved Energy drain, Life drain, Positive energy resistance, Improved initiative, Great Fortitude.
CR:18


Spell-like abilities(Cha-based, CL 21):
At Will: Entropic shield, Shield of faith
3/day: Silence, Eagle’s splendor, Bull’s strength, Protection from energy Deeper darkness
2/day: Divine power, Freedom of movement, Flame strike, True seeing, Wall of stone, Harm, Word of recall, Wind Walk
1/day: Greater Scrying, Blasphemy

Energy drain (including feat benefits):
Upon receiving succesful hit with a natural weapon or melee weapon from Aspect of Undeath, a living creature gains one negative level and receives an additional 8 points of negative energy damage. The DC for removing the negative level is 28. The DC is Charisma-Based. When the Aspect of Undeath bestows a negative level on a victim, it gains 13 temporary hitpoints (26 on a critical hit) and +1 on bonus on skill checks, ability checks, attack rolls, and saving throws, these benefits last for 1 hour.

Create spawn:
A humanoid slain by the Aspect of Undeath becomes a normal wight (50% chance) or a vampire spawn (50% chance) in 1d4 rounds. Spawn created in this way remain enslaved under the Aspect of Undeath’s control until their masters destruction. They have normal statistics for monsters of their type as per the monster manual, but conserve their memories.
 

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Needs a good description to bring it to life, so to speak. But why does it get a Con bonus to hit points when it has no Con? I think it also gets one more feat at 21 HD. Shouldn't the damage bonus from Str be +12, since it has more than one attack? Some of those ability scores are insanely high for a Medium creature. But oh well... :)
 

robjh said:
But why does it get a Con bonus to hit points when it has no Con?

Improved Toughness feat.

robjh said:
Shouldn't the damage bonus from Str be +12, since it has more than one attack?

correct! :) if it only had one claw attack as part of its full attack, it would get +18.
 

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