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<blockquote data-quote="orchid blossom" data-source="post: 1324662" data-attributes="member: 12815">All the advice given so far sounds good to me.&nbsp; So instead of repeating it all, I thought I'd give an example.&nbsp; This description probably has more personality stuff in it than needed, but too much is better than not enough.Fiona Lochmar (Aristocrat/Sorcerer)Fiona is a young woman (18 years old) who until this spring lived asheltered life as the daughter of a rich and noble family.&nbsp; She left homewithout permission to help the Lochmar side of the family regain and holdtheir rightful lands and titles.&nbsp; She is a spirited girl who has been bothterrified and enthralled by the opportunity to experience and help, aswell as the development of her powers of magic.&nbsp; (Sorcerer)Fiona stands 5'6&quot; tall, and has softly curling, coppery red hair thatfalls to the middle of her back.&nbsp; It is generally worn loose, except forthe front, which is pulled back softly from her face so she can see.&nbsp; Hereyes are a deep blue and expressive.&nbsp; She has a lovely face, kept frombeing too sweet by the Lochmar nose, (aquiline) which somehow looks goodon her.&nbsp; Her figure is proportionate to her height, she's well but notoverly endowed and not afraid to emphasize it with a daring neckline nowand then.&nbsp; She always wears a simple gold cross necklace.Fiona always dresses as a noblewoman.&nbsp; (Courtiers outfit, dresses, neverpants)&nbsp; &nbsp; Any outfit of hers will incorporate the colors of the Lochmarclan, (blue &amp; green), although they may not be the prominent colors.She has a strong personality that often pulls people to her.&nbsp; (18 Chr,that sorcerer thing again.)&nbsp; Men often feel either protective or desirousof her. Since she left home she has become a more understanding and caringperson, although she still has a streak of selfishness in her when it comes to things like having the best room, etc.Hope that's helpful.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="orchid blossom, post: 1324662, member: 12815"] All the advice given so far sounds good to me. So instead of repeating it all, I thought I'd give an example. This description probably has more personality stuff in it than needed, but too much is better than not enough. Fiona Lochmar (Aristocrat/Sorcerer) Fiona is a young woman (18 years old) who until this spring lived a sheltered life as the daughter of a rich and noble family. She left home without permission to help the Lochmar side of the family regain and hold their rightful lands and titles. She is a spirited girl who has been both terrified and enthralled by the opportunity to experience and help, as well as the development of her powers of magic. (Sorcerer) Fiona stands 5'6" tall, and has softly curling, coppery red hair that falls to the middle of her back. It is generally worn loose, except for the front, which is pulled back softly from her face so she can see. Her eyes are a deep blue and expressive. She has a lovely face, kept from being too sweet by the Lochmar nose, (aquiline) which somehow looks good on her. Her figure is proportionate to her height, she's well but not overly endowed and not afraid to emphasize it with a daring neckline now and then. She always wears a simple gold cross necklace. Fiona always dresses as a noblewoman. (Courtiers outfit, dresses, never pants) Any outfit of hers will incorporate the colors of the Lochmar clan, (blue & green), although they may not be the prominent colors. She has a strong personality that often pulls people to her. (18 Chr, that sorcerer thing again.) Men often feel either protective or desirous of her. Since she left home she has become a more understanding and caring person, although she still has a streak of selfishness in her when it comes to things like having the best room, etc. Hope that's helpful. [/QUOTE]

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