D&D 5E Help with a homebrew Paladin sub-class

[Yunru]

I really like this. Going to tweak it a bit though. Make the seventh level give you a Young Dragon mount of the colour of your Dragon Master (that doesn't take actions to command come 15th level), make it require knowing Draconic, and probably replace the capstone with something that feels more... Dragon-y.

has also inspired me to try and write up a Dragon Patron for the Warlock.

 

[Bitbrain]

I really like this. Going to tweak it a bit though. Make the seventh level give you a Young Dragon mount of the colour of your Dragon Master (that doesn't take actions to command come 15th level), make it require knowing Draconic, and probably replace the capstone with something that feels more... Dragon-y.

has also inspired me to try and write up a Dragon Patron for the Warlock.

Ooh . . . that might make for a more simplified but effective 7th level sub-class

I had actually planned to create a Pact of the Dragon Warlock after I finalized this Paladin sub-class, so it's really nice to see somebody else has the same idea.

 

[Yunru]

Ooh . . . that might make for a more simplified but effective 7th level sub-class

Well I know drawing from the original beastmaster ranger is a mistake, but I figured the level 7 dragon can only use actions or bonus actions if you spend your own to verbally order them (movement and reactions are fine), and then at level 15 it can operate on its own freely (and can be instructed non-verbally).

 

[Bitbrain]

I've made more changes to the sub-class.
Any better?

 

[Yunru]

For Oath spells, I gave it stuff like Chromatic Orb (because dragons of different colours, seemed fitting), Polymorph (they all do it), and Command/Dominate Beast/etc.

 

[Bitbrain]

I have finished working on this homebrew.
Sincerest thanks to everyone who gave me advice on how to make it a better sub-class