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<blockquote data-quote="TheNinjaD" data-source="post: 4466857" data-attributes="member: 70611"><p>First, I would make the creature's primary attack do more damage. I realize that you allow it to deal more damage to a blinded target (and that it is able to blind them itself) but 1 damage still seems low to me.</p><p></p><p>Eyes of the Hunt looks like it would be too much for a minion to have. The fact that it only recharges on a six does a lot to balance that out but, in my opinion, it is not enough. I would make that a melee attack and make it only blind until the end of your creature's next turn.</p><p></p><p>Also, I would get rid of the Utility Powers unless you really need them for flavor. That seem, at least to me, like far too much for a minion to have. </p><p></p><p>Alternatively, you could keep almost everything as-is (except for damage) by making this creature not a minion. In that case, I think it would be great.</p><p></p><p>Remember, though, that all of this is just my thoughts on the creature. I don't know exactly what you are going for and so some of my suggestions might seem unthinkable to you.</p><p></p><p>You're off to a good start. Keep at it.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="TheNinjaD, post: 4466857, member: 70611"] First, I would make the creature's primary attack do more damage. I realize that you allow it to deal more damage to a blinded target (and that it is able to blind them itself) but 1 damage still seems low to me. Eyes of the Hunt looks like it would be too much for a minion to have. The fact that it only recharges on a six does a lot to balance that out but, in my opinion, it is not enough. I would make that a melee attack and make it only blind until the end of your creature's next turn. Also, I would get rid of the Utility Powers unless you really need them for flavor. That seem, at least to me, like far too much for a minion to have. Alternatively, you could keep almost everything as-is (except for damage) by making this creature not a minion. In that case, I think it would be great. Remember, though, that all of this is just my thoughts on the creature. I don't know exactly what you are going for and so some of my suggestions might seem unthinkable to you. You're off to a good start. Keep at it. [/QUOTE]
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