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<blockquote data-quote="toucanbuzz" data-source="post: 8521642" data-attributes="member: 19270">
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<li data-xf-list-type="ol">&quot;Red Hand&quot; is often associated with radical political stances, could be interpreted as a veiled dig at WOTC and its support of all persons regardless of their sexuality, and how it is poisoning the tiny village community (aka enworld) of Morrus.</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ol">Grammar issues as pointed out by [USER=23751]@Maxperson[/USER]. The synopsis reads like it was written by a middle-school student.</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ol">Cover page has a horrible sentence. &quot;Something poisoning the people of this tiny village and the party needs to investigate to find out what the cause of this?&quot; Should be &quot;is poisoning&quot;, &quot;what is the cause,&quot; and should not end in a question mark.</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ol">Underdark use likely violates <s>the Open Game License</s>. [edit, copyright]. You'll <a href="https://media.wizards.com/2016/downloads/SRD-OGL_V1.1.pdf" target="_blank">find the wording here.</a></li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ol">Same with the capitalized Realms. While omitting the word &quot;Forgotten,&quot; the capitalizing of the word is suggestive of the most well-known setting for D&amp;D and is an awkward choice of words otherwise.</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ol">Wincen in his twitter feed observed the cover art is already used on another product. <a href="https://twitter.com/wincenworks/status/1484692467299811328/photo/1" target="_blank">Photo here.</a> Amateur hour, and he's critical that they don't appear to give the artist credit.</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ol">He also links the likelihood (captured on discord and removed by the Dungeon Hobby Shop museum) the cover page logo is not their registered trademark.</li>
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[QUOTE="toucanbuzz, post: 8521642, member: 19270"] [LIST=1] [*]"Red Hand" is often associated with radical political stances, could be interpreted as a veiled dig at WOTC and its support of all persons regardless of their sexuality, and how it is poisoning the tiny village community (aka enworld) of Morrus. [*]Grammar issues as pointed out by [USER=23751]@Maxperson[/USER]. The synopsis reads like it was written by a middle-school student. [*]Cover page has a horrible sentence. [I]"Something poisoning the people of this tiny village and the party needs to investigate to find out what the cause of this?[/I]" Should be "is poisoning", "what is the cause," and should not end in a question mark. [*]Underdark use likely violates [S]the Open Game License[/S]. [edit, copyright]. You'll [URL='https://media.wizards.com/2016/downloads/SRD-OGL_V1.1.pdf']find the wording here.[/URL] [*]Same with the capitalized Realms. While omitting the word "Forgotten," the capitalizing of the word is suggestive of the most well-known setting for D&D and is an awkward choice of words otherwise. [*]Wincen in his twitter feed observed the cover art is already used on another product. [URL='https://twitter.com/wincenworks/status/1484692467299811328/photo/1']Photo here.[/URL] Amateur hour, and he's critical that they don't appear to give the artist credit. [*]He also links the likelihood (captured on discord and removed by the Dungeon Hobby Shop museum) the cover page logo is not their registered trademark. [/LIST] [/QUOTE]

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