Although I wasn't thinking of the scale, just that you've got Spain, France, England and Germany squished together. I like it, gives your players a good idea of what the setting entails at a quick glance.
I also like that you seem to have left out Italy (and by extension, Rome and the Vatican) - and I wonder if that means there's no "old empire" and no overarching religious empire.
You have a town called Dein on Le Grand Lac, and Les Plaines Dein west of the town. But the road running from the town across the fields is named La Route Dien (the "ie" transposed)