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Message: <blockquote data-quote="cool hand luke" data-source="post: 959361" data-attributes="member: 10926">First off, I'd like to thank Rune for the time and effort he's putting into this.I really enjoyed your critique.  Talk about bad formatting thought!  it looked ok in word, then I copied it, and was amazed at how it turned out.  oh well, luckily I lived through that round, and that is at least EASY to change.  Hooks have always been my weak point as a dm.  but some of you guys have really showed me how it should be done, so there should be improvement in that area.  The carnies needed the IOUN stones to get inside so they could fence them.  didn't make that clear.  the ring of animal friendship shows my laziness, didn't look up the stupid description.for the carpet shop, I had in mind that it was really a carpet shop, and the owner wound up owing one of the Paisans a favor (clearly stolen from the opening scene of the godfather, with Bonasera, they undertaker, Some day, and that day may never come, I'll call upon you to do a service for me. But uh, until that day -- accept this justice as a gift on my daughter's wedding day.)  and his payment was letting his store be used to move the goods.</blockquote>