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<blockquote data-quote="Talix" data-source="post: 965694" data-attributes="member: 9154">Wow - those were two very cool scenarios!&nbsp; Congrats definitely to both of you, Seasong and Cool Hand Luke!Seasong: Despite the fact that it seemed vaguely like there wasn't really a whole lot of actual action defined, there are TONS of plothooks to follow and ways to take it.&nbsp; It's definitely more of a &quot;some assembly required&quot;, but the finished product could be really cool!&nbsp; <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f609.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=";)" title="Wink&nbsp; &nbsp; ;)"&nbsp; data-smilie="2"data-shortname=";)" />Cool Hand Luke: Despite being a newcomer to these competitions, you definitely show a lot of promise.&nbsp; The beginning of your story started out slow (since you were basically just telling a story at that point), but once you got into the current happenings it definitely picked up.&nbsp; I loved how Jezzell used the fact that she was immune to poison without realizing why she had that ability (in fact, when you were describing that encounter and the contact poison, I couldn't figure out at first why she was immune, either! Great differentiation between personalities.).&nbsp; <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)"&nbsp; data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />&nbsp; And definite rat-bastardness throughout, especially at the end where the PCs are attacked by a well-known public figure in private.&nbsp; <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f600.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":D" title="Big grin&nbsp; &nbsp; :D"&nbsp; data-smilie="8"data-shortname=":D" />Overall, I could definitely see it going either way.&nbsp; Good luck!&nbsp; <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f600.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":D" title="Big grin&nbsp; &nbsp; :D"&nbsp; data-smilie="8"data-shortname=":D" /></blockquote>

[QUOTE="Talix, post: 965694, member: 9154"] Wow - those were two very cool scenarios! Congrats definitely to both of you, Seasong and Cool Hand Luke! Seasong: Despite the fact that it seemed vaguely like there wasn't really a whole lot of actual action defined, there are TONS of plothooks to follow and ways to take it. It's definitely more of a "some assembly required", but the finished product could be really cool! ;) Cool Hand Luke: Despite being a newcomer to these competitions, you definitely show a lot of promise. The beginning of your story started out slow (since you were basically just telling a story at that point), but once you got into the current happenings it definitely picked up. I loved how Jezzell used the fact that she was immune to poison without realizing why she had that ability (in fact, when you were describing that encounter and the contact poison, I couldn't figure out at first why she was immune, either! Great differentiation between personalities.). :) And definite rat-bastardness throughout, especially at the end where the PCs are attacked by a well-known public figure in private. :D Overall, I could definitely see it going either way. Good luck! :D [/QUOTE]

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